2013山东高考真题英语作文解析及高分范文

　　导语：2013年高考终于落下帷幕，高考英语作文中又考了哪些热点话题和体裁呢?这些真题英语作文能够帮助英语写作。我们下面是小编为大家整理的2013山东高考英语作文点评解析及高分范文，供大家参考。

　　第二节：写作(满分30分)

　　假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件：

　　1. 未及时回复的原因;

　　2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

　　注意： 1. 次数：120~150;

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到书信题的大框架中，考了一篇以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。

　　第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的

　　第二段：道歉部分(相当于写信背景)

　　第三段：假期安排部分

　　第四段：补充说明+客套话

　　Dear Tom,

　　How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay.(写信目的)

　　How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

　　By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost, I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1) Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

　　These are my plan for the summer vacation. Whats yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)