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我的朋友的父母是有交通工具的情况

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My friend is Mike. He is far from me. His family has three people .And hisfamily are his father,mather and he. his home is about 6 kilometers from school.He usually goes to school by bike ,and he sometimes take the bus go to school.His father works in hospotil.He goesto work by car,about take 40 minute.His mother works in bank,she goes to work by subway

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I have a friend named Mike, who lives far away from me. There are three people in his family: his father, mother and he himself. His study in a school about 6 kilometers from his home. So he usually goes to school by bike. And he catch a bus to school if he leaves home late. His father works in a hospital. He often go to work by car. Its about 40 minutes driving. His mother works in a bank. She always go there by subway bucause its really convenient.

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