下面雅思为大家整理了雅思写作范文:境外旅游的利弊,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。
International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?
Air travel combined with early retirement and people with money to spend has meant that more and more people can travel the world. Some countries, especially those with famous historical sights and beautiful natural scenery try to attract this large market. While there are some problems that can be caused with all this travel, generally it is a positive thing.
Firstly, consider that all these tourists mean money that governments are eager to tap into. For many countries, tourism is a big part of GDP and without it their economies would suffer. Foreign tourists bring important dollars to the service industry and lots of small shops and vendors.
Secondly, by encouraging tourism governments are promoting their cities and countries. In my country, China, for example, increased tourism and hosting the Olympics has changed peoples perception of our country. At the same time, tourism allows local people to gain exposure to people from other countries, which is also a good thing.
Of course its not always a perfect picture. Not all tourists have a good attitude and manners. And in some cases they may even have a negative influence on the local population. But these situations are not so common, and embassies can create tough guidelines for getting a visa. This seems like a reasonable compromise.
To conclude, international travel is a great thing, but it is a privilege that should not be abused. Governments should encourage it, but also put in place measures to keep dangerous people away. This will result in a win-win situation for everyone.
点评:
写作线索:首段,国际旅游利大于弊;第二段,刺激本国经济;第三段,加深双方了解;第四段;不利之处。末段总结。
本文我们看到加汉老师是以一位中国学生的口吻写出来。他曾告诉我他的中文名字有两个含义:加拿大的男子汉;加入汉族。
第四段的观点比较抽象,其实针对国际旅游的弊端,我们可以谈对旅游资源的过度开发;旅游景点的环保压力;对当地居民生活方式的影响;经济过渡依赖于旅游业的后果等等。
如果我写这篇文章,国际旅游的好处第一条我就说:许多人类的文明古迹虽然是某个国家拥有的,其实也是全人类的财富。比如长城、金字塔。应该让全世界的人去参观、欣赏和尊重。先上升到一个全人类的高度,凸显大气。大部分考生不是写不出来,主要是想不到。思想有多高,作为分数就有多高。
先学习下面的词汇和短语,然后再重读范文,体会它们在文中的运用。
词汇
Retirement n.退休
Tourism n. 旅游业
Vendor n.卖主,小贩
promote vt.促进,推广
host vt. 主办
perception n.观念,理解
embassy n.大使馆
guideline n.指导方针
compromise n.妥协,折衷
privilege n.特权
abuse v.滥用
短语
famous historical sights 历史名胜
beautiful natural scenery 美丽的自然风光
be eager to渴望
tap into 利用
in some cases在有些情况下
have a negative influence on对有负面影响
win-win situation 双赢局面
三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子
Some countries,especially those with famous historical sights and beautiful natural scenery try to attract this large market.
Secondly,by encouraging tourism governments are promoting their cities and countries.
This will result in a win-win situation for everyone.
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