黄山松，我读懂了你！

你能读懂黄山峭壁上的那株迎客松吗？

Can you read the greeting pine on the cliff of Huangshan Mountain?

云缠它，雾绕它，雨抽它，风摧它，霜欺雪压，雷电轰顶，大自然仿佛容不得它的存在，定要除之而后快。然而，它不低头，不让步，不畏风刀雪斧的剔抉，在数不尽的反击和怒号声中，练就了一身铮铮铁骨，凝聚了一腔朗朗硬气。

Cloud around it, fog around it, rain pumping it, wind destroying it, frost bullying snow pressure, thunder and lightning, nature can not tolerate its existence, must be removed and then fast. However, it does not bow its head, do not give in, do not fear the wind, the snow, and the axe. In the countless counterattacks and howls, it has developed a strong character and a strong spirit.

一次次，它在风雨中抗争呐喊；一回回，它把云雾撕扯成碎片；它以威严逼迫霜雪乖乖逃遁；它以刚硬驱逐雷电远避它方……

Over and over again, it fought and cried in the wind and rain; over and over again, it tore the clouds into pieces; it forced frost and snow to flee obediently with its majesty; it drove thunder and lightning away with its hardness

一切生之渴望、生之奋斗、生之抗争，都在这由苍松摇出的命运交响曲中展现出来了。

All the desire, struggle and struggle of life are shown in the symphony of fate.

读黄山松，你不觉得我们的安徽正是一棵伟岸挺拔的劲松吗？

Reading Huangshan pine, don't you think our Anhui Province is just a giant and tall strong pine?

安徽，襟江带淮，千年激荡，几经兴衰，这片辽阔的大地上曾上演过多少群雄逐鹿、惊心动魄的故事啊！

Anhui, with the Huaihe River, has experienced ups and downs for thousands of years. How many exciting stories have been staged in this vast land!

这里曾经是华夏文明的发祥地之一。老庄道学，三曹华章，新安文学，桐城散文……这些，都是中华文化中不可或缺的一部分。

It used to be one of the birthplaces of Chinese civilization. Laozhuang Daoism, three caohuazhang, Xin'an literature, Tongcheng prose These are all indispensable parts of Chinese culture.

一句“祸兮，福之所倚；福兮，祸之所伏”道出了多少人世沧桑；一句“锄禾日当午，汗滴禾下土”道出了安徽人民的勤劳和艰辛。

One sentence "misfortune, where the blessing depends; blessing, where the misfortune lies" tells us how many vicissitudes of life have taken place; one sentence "weeding day at noon, sweat dripping under the grain" tells us the hard work and hardship of Anhui people.

“相看两不厌，独有敬亭山”，“天门中断楚江开，碧水东流至此回”，“五岳归来不看山，黄山归来不看岳”……这些，不正印证了文人墨客们对江淮秀丽景色的向往吗？

"We never tire of seeing each other, but only Jingting mountain", "Tianmen interrupts the opening of the Chu River, and the clear water flows eastward to this place", "the return of the five mountains does not look at the mountains, and the return of the Yellow Mountains does not look at the mountains" These, not true proof of the literati on the beautiful scenery of the Yangtze River and Huaihe River yearning for it?

众人皆知大禹“三过家门而不入”，却有几人清楚那倚门而立翘首遥望、“人面桃花相映红”的正是咱安徽潜山姑娘呀！“乔公二女秀所钟，秋水并蒂开芙蓉”令诗人充满了无限的向往，而那“举手长劳劳，两情同依依”的焦刘之恋不也跨越时空感动今人吗？

Everyone knows that Dayu "passed through the house three times but didn't enter", but some people know that it's our Anhui Qianshan girl who stands up against the door and looks up and looks at her head! The poet is full of infinite yearning for "Qiao Gong and her two daughters show the bell, autumn water and hibiscus". But the love of Jiao Liu, who "raises his hand and works hard for a long time, and relies on both feelings together", also moves people across time and space?

文房四宝，徽派建筑，芜湖铁画，黄梅戏，凤阳花鼓……这些，全是江淮儿女智慧的结晶啊！

Four treasures of study, Huizhou architecture, Wuhu iron painting, Huangmei Opera, Fengyang Flower Drum All these are the crystallization of wisdom of Jianghuai people!

千年前推翻了秦王朝残暴统治的轰轰烈烈的陈胜、吴广起义，千年后在抗日战争、解放战争中浴血奋战的无数勇士可歌可泣的事迹，无不印证了江淮儿女不畏压迫、抵御欺凌的铮铮铁骨。

The heroic uprising of Chen Sheng and Wu Guang, who overthrew the brutal rule of the Qin Dynasty thousands of years ago, and the heroic deeds of countless brave men who fought hard in the Anti Japanese War and the liberation war thousands of years later, have all proved the unyielding character of the people of Jianghuai who are not afraid of oppression and resist bullying.

黄山松，我读懂了你！黄山松，你是徽魂！

Huangshan pine, I can read you! Huangshan pine, you are the soul of Hui!

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[comments on famous teachers]

本文立意深远，作者以“黄山松”为象征物，通过对黄山松的描写，表达了对安徽文化、安徽人民的精神的讴歌、赞美之情。从黄山松入手，切入口小，但能小中见大，虚实相间，构筑黄山松与“徽魂”的相似点。文采飞扬是其另一大特点，整散句交错使用，“引用＋排比”的修辞，抒情酣畅，气势充沛，扩充了文章的内涵，强化了对黄山松、对徽魂的赞美之情。

The author takes "Huangshan pine" as a symbol, and through the description of Huangshan pine, expresses the eulogy and praise of Anhui culture and the spirit of Anhui people. Starting from Huangshan pine, it has a small cut in, but it can see the big from the small, and alternates the real and the virtual, so as to build the similarities between Huangshan pine and "Hui soul". Another major feature of the poem is its elegant style. The use of whole and scattered sentences in a staggered way, the rhetoric of "quotation + parallelism", which is lyrical and full of momentum, expands the connotation of the article, and strengthens the praise of Huangshan pine and Huihun.