难忘的童年

童年如画，定格无数精彩的瞬间；童年如歌，跳跃着无数欢乐的音符；童年如河，翻腾着无忧无虑的欢乐的浪花，童年如同奇妙的万花筒，使人永远沉浸在愉快之中——那无边的幻想和傻傻的童稚会凑成的一件又一件趣事，想起来总让我笑破肚皮。

Childhood is picturesque, with countless wonderful moments fixed; childhood is like a song, with countless happy notes skipping; childhood is like a river, with carefree and happy waves, and childhood is like a wonderful kaleidoscope, which makes people immersed in happiness forever - the endless fantasy and silly childishness will make up one interesting thing after another, which always makes me laugh.

刚记事的时候，看到爸爸刮胡须很好玩，电动剃须刀一开“嗡嗡嗡”胡子拉碴的老脸一下子就变得“焕然一新”。我多想试一下，可我的下巴那么光滑，无法享受那种感觉。一天，爸妈出发了，爷爷奶奶在里屋休息，只剩下我一个人在院子玩。怪寂寞的，干啥好呢？突然听到“喵——喵”的叫声，哦，原来小花猫也很寂寞。我灵机一动，何不给小花猫当一回美容师呢，让它美一回呢？对，先给它剪一剪胡须，让它变得利索一些。于是，我找来剪刀，唤过小花猫，把小花猫放到椅子上，并学着爸爸的样子给小花猫抹上点肥皂沫。可小花猫“不识好人心”，不愿接受我的免费服务，一溜烟地跑了。我好容易费了九牛二虎之力才把他捉住，用一条绳子把它绑在了椅子上。“哈哈”，这会看你上哪里逃？我拿起电动剃须刀就要给他剃胡须，可小花猫的胡须太长了，我费尽了浑身的解数。也给它剃不下来，也许这种服务不舒服，它一边“呜呜”地挣扎着，一边用用爪子来抗议我的“竭诚服务”。我无奈中一眼看到了妈妈放在窗台上的剪刀，一下子有了主意，拿过来“咔喳”一声，小花猫的胡须剪掉了一半。我刚要剪另一半，忽然传来爷爷的喊声“不要剪啊！”我连忙放下剪刀。爷爷从里屋出来，看到这番情景，又气又笑，板着脸说“好孙女，猫的胡子是不能剪的。”“为什么不能剪啊？您不是常说‘人物一理’吗”我觉得我还很有理，歪着头反问爷爷。见我那副傻样，爷爷的脸上见了笑容：“猫的胡子非常重要，是用来测量老鼠洞口宽窄的，并且能保持猫的平衡。不信你把它放下来，让它走几步试试。”我把猫解下来，放到地上。我本以为它会“嗖”的一声跑掉，可没想到它东倒西歪，一阵风都能把它吹倒似的。

When I was just recording, it was fun to see my father shave. As soon as the electric razor turned on the "buzzing" old face with a scratchy beard, it suddenly became "brand new". I'd like to try more, but my chin is so smooth that I can't enjoy it. One day, my parents set out. My grandparents had a rest in the inner room. I was the only one left to play in the yard. It's lonely. What can I do? Suddenly heard "meow - meow" call, oh, the original kitten is also very lonely. I have an idea. Why not be a beautician for the little flower cat and let it be beautiful? Yes, first cut the beard to make it easier. So, I found scissors, called the kitten, put the kitten on the chair, and like my father, put some soap on the kitten. But the kitten "does not know the good people", unwilling to accept my free service, ran away. It was so easy for me to catch him and tie him to the chair with a rope. "Ha ha", it depends on where you run? When I picked up the electric razor, I was going to shave his beard, but the beard of the kitten was too long, so I spent all my energy to figure out. It can't shave off. Maybe this kind of service is uncomfortable. It struggles "whine" while protesting my "dedicated service" with its claws. I had no choice but to see my mother's scissors on the windowsill. Suddenly, I had an idea. With a sound of "Kacha", the little cat's beard was cut in half. I was just about to cut the other half when my grandfather called out, "don't cut!" I quickly put down the scissors. Grandpa came out of the inner room and saw the scene. He was angry and smiling. He said with a straight face, "good granddaughter, cat's beard can't be cut." "Why can't you cut it? Don't you often say "people are reasonable?" I think I'm quite reasonable. I asked grandpa with my head askew. Seeing my silly look, my grandfather saw a smile on his face: "the cat's beard is very important. It is used to measure the width of the mouse hole and keep the balance of the cat. If you don't believe it, put it down and let it take a few steps. " I took the cat off and put it on the ground. I thought it would "swish" and run away, but I didn't expect it to turn around, like a gust of wind can blow it down.

什么是平衡，我大了才知道，可猫被剪掉胡须的景象到现在还记忆犹新。哦！童年如画，童年如歌，……难忘的童年趣事，使人永远沉浸在愉快之中。

What is balance? I didn't know until I was older, but I still remember the scene of the cat being cut off. Oh Childhood is like a picture, childhood is like a song Unforgettable childhood fun, so that people will always be immersed in happiness.

教师评析：是的“童年如画，童年如歌”。该习作选材新颖，语言流畅，写出了童心童趣。且还可以看出小作者语言功底较深。

Teacher's comments: Yes, "childhood is like a picture, childhood is like a song". The material selection of the exercise is novel, the language is fluent, and the childlike innocence is written. It can also be seen that the language skills of the author are deep.