浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（69）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）

　　假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend

　　Λ

　　weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

　　am

　　on

　　I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother. So am I. My mother is an ordinary teacher. She always works hardly, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t good health. She had been suffering from arthritis (关节炎) for many years. In spite of this, he never stops working or gives up hopeI still remember the day that my mother accepted a card of congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard works; Happy Teachers’ Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my eyes. I am proud of my mother.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　最近，你校高一学生在校报“答疑解惑”栏目中恳求即将毕业的高三同学告诉他们高中阶段学好英语的秘诀。假如你叫李平，请根据以下提示，用英语给他们写一封100-120词的回信，准备刊登在下期校报上。

　　要点包括：

　　1．学英语的动机；

　　2. 学英语的态度；

　　3. 学英语的方法：根据自己的经验，推荐1--2点行之有效的高中英语学习方法。

　　注意：文章的开头、结尾已给出（不计词数）。

　　Senior One,

　　I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty learning English in senior school. I can understand how it feels. Now, I’d like to share with you my secret of successful English learning.

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　　I hope my advice above will be of some help to you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ping

　　第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

　　I firmly believe that everyone in the world loves his mother. So am I. My mother is an

　　do

　　ordinary teacher. She always works hardly, just as other mothers do every day. In fact, she isn’t Λ

　　hard

　　in

　　good health. She had been suffering from arthritis (关节炎) for many years. In spite of this, he never stops working or gives up hope. I still remember the day that my mother accepted a card of

　　when

　　received

　　congratulations for Teachers’ Day from her director. The card was read “Thank you for your hard

　　works; Happy Teachers’ Day to you!” At that moment, I was so moving that tears came to my

　　work

　　moved

　　eyes. I am proud of my mother.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　(One possible version)

　　Senior One,

　　I’m sorry to know that you’re having difficulty learning English in senior school. I can understand how it feels. Now, I’d like to share with you my secret of successful English learning.

　　First of all, ask yourself seriously “What am I learning English for?” Only highly- motivated students will hold a right attitude to English learning and will be enthusiastic learners, ready to do listening, speaking, reading and writing regularly, and above all, will enjoy doing these things systematically.

　　Then come effective learning methods. Based on my learning experience, listening has brought me enormous benefits. By being exposed to different accents, I’ve developed an ear for the exact words and phrases people use. Through listening, I’ve established a large vocabulary, which greatly helps strengthen my confidence in speaking and writing. Besides, reading English newspapers on a regular basis has brought about dramatic improvement in English learning. I’m not only well informed of what’s going on in and outside China, but my interest in English is maintained.

　　I’m sure motivation and proper attitude combined with effective learning methods are the recipe for successful English learning.

　　I hope my advice above will be of some help to you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Ping