浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（32）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)

　　One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　当今食品安全问题已经成为人们关注的一个话题，请你以Food Safety（食品安全）为题并参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

　　要点：

　　1. 简要描述食品安全问题；

　　2. 分析造成该问题的主要原因:1) 利益驱使 2）滥用杀虫剂 3）给动物注射激素3. 提出相应的建议。

　　注意：词数100—120，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：激素hormones ， 杀虫剂 pesticide

　　Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have caused much attention.

　　改错

　　while—when

　　us—him

　　so-but

　　has-had

　　checked-check

　　call in 去掉use-using

　　little前加a

　　that—what

　　really-real

　　书面表达

　　Currently, many problems concerning the safety of food have caused much attention. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for this issue.

　　First, I observe that profits drive many food producers to commit illegal things. They aim to gain more money at the expense of consumers’ health. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has some bad effect on food quality. The excessive pesticide bears enormous health risk for people. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profit. As a result, people’s health has been seriously disturbed.

　　All in all, food safety is such a great concern, and we all should establish laws and implement them effectively to avoid producing poisonous foods.