2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第一板块 能力层级（一）第7节(北师大版)

　　6．Because there was too much noise，I couldn’t go on studying. (使用with复合结构) With the noise going on，I couldn’t go on studying. 7．I didn’t take his advice，so I failed in the exam. (使用虚拟语气) If I had taken his advice，I wouldn’t have failed in the exam. 8．Because I was ill that day，I didn’t take part in the sports meeting.(使用虚拟语气) I was ill that day，otherwise I would have taken part in the sports meeting. 9．They carried out a survey among 260 students.(使用被动语态) A survey was carried out among 260 students. 10．They didn’t realize the importance of environment protecting until all the fish in the river died out. ①Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the importance of environment protecting.(使用倒装句) ②It was not until all the fish in the river died out that they realized the importance of environment protecting.(使用强调句) [演练提升] 请按以下内容要点写一篇短文，尽可能多地使用高级词汇和高级句式。 1．众所周知，世界人口在一天天增长，因此需要大量的新鲜用水。 2．随着工业的快速发展，产生了很多有毒的气体和废水，结果导致了水污染，尽管水是新的，但却不能再运用。 3．这时候人们才意识到水源的重要性，确实到了人们行动起来保护水源的时候了。不要再污染用水，否则，我们就不能再在这个地球上生存，那会是怎样的一种可怕的景象啊！ 4．只有充足的水源，世界才能蓬勃发展。 【参考范文】 As is known to all，the world population is growing day by day. So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a large population. What’s more，with industry developing rapidly，poisonous gases and waters are produced，consequently resulting in the pollution of water. Though fresh，a good amount of water can no longer be used. Only then did we realize the importance of fresh water. So it’s high time that we human beings took action to protect water resource. Stop polluting water，otherwise we wouldn’t be living in the world. What a terrible scene we would be faced with! Only with fresh water can the world be prosperous. 第七节　高级词汇与高级句式 [技法指导] 　写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩。 一、使用高级词汇的三大技巧 1．标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 As far as I’m concerned，parents’ much protection will do more harm than good to children’s future development. →As far as I’m concerned，parents’ limitless protection will do more harm than good to children’s future development.(2017·福建高考满分作文) With this experience，they will certainly like better to help others in future just like the laundrywoman has done. →With this experience，they will certainly prefer to help others in future just like the laundrywoman has done.(2017·广东高考满分作文) 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad tried to earn the money. →Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn the money.(2017·重庆高分满分作文) What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. →What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(2017·重庆高考满分作文) 3．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. [学以致用] 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语 1．We all have the same chance.

　　答案　possess 2．We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend.

　　答案　endless 3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.

　　答案　put up with 4．He didn’t listen to what I said in the class.

　　答案　turned a deaf ear to 5．We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us.

　　答案　promote 6．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.

　　答案　challenging 二、使用高级句式的七大策略 1．使用被动语态 We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2017. →About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2017.(2017·广东高考书面表达) I’m delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas. →I’m delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.(2017·上海高考满分作文) 2．使用强调句 As a saying goes，the little thing matters most.

　　→As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most.(2017·上海高考满分作文) With sincerity and faithfulness we created a harmonious atmosphere. →It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.(2017·江西高考满分作文)

　　3．使用倒装句 The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.

　　→Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(2017·福建高考满分作文) I didn’t realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways until then.

　　→Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.(2017·湖北高考短文写作) 4．使用省略句 If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.

　　→If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.(2017·山东高考满分作文) When they are compared to the traditional ones，they have three new unique functions. →Compared to the traditional ones，they have three new unique functions.(2017·湖南高考满分作文) 5．使用感叹句 It is a very splendid moment. →How splendid a moment it is！(2017·辽宁高考满分作文) I am very worried about his condition. →How worried I am about his condition.(2017·湖北高考满分作文) 6．使用with复合结构 As English words get popular in both media and daily life，a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them，leaving the public divided into two opposing groups：“For”and“Against”． →With English words getting popular in both media and daily life，a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them，leaving the public divided into two opposing groups：“For”and“Against”．(2017·江苏高考满分作文) As the society develops rapidly，it’s necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. →With the society developing rapidly，it’s necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.

　　7．使用虚拟语气 It is high time for both children and parents to take action to make small changes. →It is high time that both children and parents took action to make small changes.(2017·福建高考满分作文) I missed being hit by the car with your help. →Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.(2017·安徽高考满分作文) [学以致用] 用高级句式转换下列句子 1．Above all，we must do something to stop pollution. (使用被动语态) Above all，something must be done to stop pollution. 2．I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school. (使用强调句) It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English. 3．We don’t know its value until we lose health. (使用倒装句) Not until we lose health do we know its value. 4．If it isn’t well organized，the meeting will be a failure.(使用省略句) If not well organized，the meeting will be a failure. 5．We had a very good time with the peasants that day. (使用感叹句) What a good time we had with the peasants that day!