2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第一板块 能力层级（一）第6节(北师大版)

　　高级表达： There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing，serving passengers heart and soul and playing an important part in the traffic of Beijing. In order to make some money to support their families，they work from dawn till night. One day，I got out of the taxi in a hurry with my cellphone left in the taxi I took. On hearing what had happened，the taxi driver drove to my home as fast as possible and gave the cellphone back to me. Seeing my cellphone again，I was too excited to say a word. [学以致用] 运用非谓语动词转换短文 　大城市里高楼大厦林立，房价越来越高。一方面，很多人无房居住，另一方面，大量房子却卖不出去。不少人即使买了一套住房，恐怕也要一辈子辛辛苦苦工作来还银行贷款。我们希望政府采取措施，关心这些收入不高的人群。 一般表达： There are more and more tall buildings in big cities. Their prices are going up day by day. On one hand，there are still lots of people. They have no houses to live in. On the other hand，many apartments are hard to be sold out. Even if you buy an apartment，I’m afraid you have to pay off the money you borrow from the bank. You will work hard day and night all your life. I do hope our government can take strong measures to solve the housing problem and take care of the people. Their incomes are low. 高级表达： There are more and more tall buildings in big cities，with their prices going up day by day. On one hand，there are still lots of people having no houses to live in. On the other hand，many apartments are hard to be sold out. Even if you have bought an apartment，I’m afraid you have to try to pay off the money borrowed from the bank，working hard day and night all your life. I do hope our government can take strong measures to solve the housing problem，showing great concern for the people whose incomes are not high enough. [演练提升] 请按以下内容要点写一篇英语短文，尽可能多地使用非谓语动词 1．在阴历1月1日庆贺中国的阴历(lunar)年，也被称作春节，受到全世界所有中国人的喜爱。 2．像世界上许多其他人一样，中国喜欢庆贺他们传统的节日和春天的到来。 3．在春节，大部分中国人更愿意待在家里，吃大餐、与家人聊天；其他一些人可能会去走访朋友或者度长假。 4．另外，人们会在新年的到来之际说“新年快乐”以表达良好的祝愿。 5．这也是孩子们的节日，他们会打扮得漂漂亮亮地，然后和父母一块去亲戚家里，会得到压岁钱。

　　【参考范文】 Observed/Celebrated on January 1 lunar month，Chinese Lunar New Year’s Day，also called the Spring Festival，is popular with all the Chinese people all over the world. Like many other people in the world，Chinese enjoy celebrating their traditional festival and the coming of spring. At the Spring Festival，most people prefer to stay at home，having big meals and chatting with family members while others may take a trip to visit their friends or to spend their long holiday.

　　Besides，people will say “Happy New Year Spring Festival” to express good wishes for the coming New Year. It is also a children’s festival，when they can dress up and go to their relatives’ homes with their parents to get lucky money in red paper.

　　第六节　非谓语动词的写作 [技法指导] 　众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。 一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句 　写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词对两个简单句进行转换，使其成为较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用三步法。 第一步：写出两个简单句。 第二步：找准两个简单句的对接点，让一个句子作为主干，另一个句子用非谓语动词进行改写。 第三步：判断应用何种非谓语动词，把握好时态和语态，最后连接起来。 【示例】 第一步：写出两个简单句。 ①I feel quite sorry for that.

　　②I begin to think about what to do to help.

　　第二步：让句②作主句，用非谓语动词改写句①。 第三步：句①表示原因，其动词feel与主语I之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作原因状语。 Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.(2017·陕西高考满分作文) 其他几个转换的例子如下： 1．另一方面，我将帮着建立英语角，提供给我们学生一个练习英语口语的平台。 On the other hand，I will help set up the English corner. I will provide us students a platform to practice our oral English. →On the other hand，I will help set up the English corner，providing us students a platform to practice our oral English.(2017·天津高考满分作文)(现在分词作状语) 2．这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。 All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom. →All the people here like the novel written by Tom.(过去分词作定语) 3．我们应该多讲英语。我们认为这是很重要的。 We should speak more English. We think it is very important. →We think it very important to speak more English.(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语) [学以致用] 运用非谓语动词转换简单句 1．We were touched by the teacher’s words. We decided to work hard.(用过去分词作状语) Touched by the teacher’s words，we decided to work hard. 2．I didn’t receive her letter. I had to write again.(用现在分词作状语) Not having received her letter，I had to write again. 3．The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very angry.(用动名词作主语) The boy’s coming to school late again made the teacher very angry. 4．The boys were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier.(用不定式作目的状语) The boys were making the most of time (so as) to finish the work earlier. 5．I saw an old granny. She lay on the ground. I went over to help her.(用现在分词作状语) Seeing an old granny lying on the ground，I went over to help her. 二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句 　用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可，所以只需两步。 【示例】 第一步：写出复合句。 After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.

　　第二步：把after引导的时间状语从句转换为非谓语动词，practice与we之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成时作状语。 →Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.(2017·湖南高考满分作文) 其他几个转换的例子如下： 1．惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。 Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good. →Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.(2017·浙江高考满分作文)(过去分词作状语) 2．看到一辆车朝她而来，我伸出手把她拉了回来。 When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

　　→Seeing a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.(2017·安徽高考满分作文)(现在分词作状语) 3．这里曾有一家化肥厂，位于城市的南边。它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。 There was a large factory，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment. →There was a large factory，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment. 简析：“原句”中分别由which引导两个定语从句，重复且单调，将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后，不仅表达多样，而且言简意明。 4．由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。因为我的英语进步很大，我确信我能考上更好的大学。 Because my teacher helps me，my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved，I’m sure I will go to a better university. →With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved，I’m sure I will go to a better university. 简析：“原句”两处重复出现由because引导的从句，读起来很别扭。换用“with＋现在分词的复合结构”后，读起来给人的感觉大不一样。 [学以致用] 运用非谓语动词转换复合句 1．As soon as they saw a few people still in the burning house，they rushed into it to save them without hesitation. →On seeing a few people still in the burning house，they rushed into it to save them without hesitation. 2．We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think that it is possible that they can master one. →We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think it possible for them to master one． 3．I took part in the meeting，which was held in Beijing last Friday. It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager who came to our company yesterday. →I took part in the meeting held in Beijing last Friday. It was very instructive，which was hosted by a manager coming to our company yesterday. 4．Mother went to work in a hurry，and she didn’t have breakfast. She was as busy as a bee these days and came back home very late. →Mother went to work in a hurry without having breakfast. She was as busy as a bee these days，coming back home very late． 三、运用非谓语动词转换短文(根据一般表达写出该短文的高级表达) 　北京市有大量的出租车司机，他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务，对北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。他们起早贪黑，赚钱养家糊口。有一次，我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上，但当我和司机同志联系上之后，他立即开车把手机送到了我的家门口，让我感动不已。 一般表达： There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing. They serve passengers heart and soul. They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing.They make some money. They work from dawn till night. One day，I left my cellphone in the taxi I took. I got in touch with the driver. He drove to my home and gave it back to me. I was very excited.