第十讲 发挥合理想象灵活阐释开放作文
(2017·高考福建卷)如何理解“成功”不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)按要求用英语写一篇短文。failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.”
—Sir Winston Churchill
内容要求:你对该引语的理解;你的相关经历;恰当的结尾。注意:短文开头2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息;词数:120左右。_________
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1.丘吉尔的名言告诉我们失败后我们不应该灰心丧气相反我们应该继续充满热情地努力尝试。(一般表达)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t lose heart right after failures;on the contrary(高级表达)(get done与keep doing sth.)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t ________________r failures;instead________________ with enthusiasm.
答案:get discouraged;keep trying成功在于你经历了失败后继续努力的能力。(一般表达)Success lies in the ability to continue efforts through failures.(高级表达)(同义句转换)Success ________________ the ability to continue efforts through failures.答案:consists in十二岁时作为生日礼物我收到了一辆漂At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.I was so excited that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than it was expected.
(高级表达)(so倒装句型省略)At the age of twelveI got a nice bike as a birthday gift.________________ I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder ________.答案:So excited was I that;than expected自行车看起来太沉太难控制了我从自行车摔了那么多次数我想放弃。(一般表达)The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.I took many falls off the bike and I wanted to give it up.(高级表达)(so...that)The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.I took ________________ off the bike ________ I wanted to give it up.答案:so many falls;that在我正要放弃时父亲过来鼓励我继续努力随着多次练习我骑得越来越好了。(一般表达)I’m going to give up and just at that time my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice(高级表达)(be about to do sth.when...)I ________________________________答案:was about to give up when回想起来如果我当时失去信心的话我认为我就不会骑自行车了。(一般表达)When I look back(高级表达)(非谓语动词作状语)____________________________答案:Looking back事实上我们不可能事事成功重要的是我们应该坚持。(一般表达)Actually(高级表达)(what引导主语从句)Actually______________________ we should stick at it.
答案:what’s important is that
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One possible version:m_Winston_Churchill_tells_us_that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures.Instead,we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.
At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still,I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice,I did better and better.Looking back,I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.
Actually,we can’t succeed in everything we try.What’s important is that we should stick at it.
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