2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达同步训练：4

　　2017届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷4（含解析）

　　1．

　　假如你叫李华,最近你和同学们就 “金钱就是一切吗?”进行了讨论.现在请你以Money is everything?为题,参照表内所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文.

　　有的人认为

　　你的看法

　　1.能用钱做自己喜欢的任何事情。 1…

　　2.能用钱买到喜欢的一切。 2…

　　3.有钱能使鬼推磨。（Money makes the mare go.） 3…

　　注意: 1. 开头部分已写好,你只需接着写.

　　2. 所写内容必须包括表格中你同学的观点和你自己的至少三个观点.

　　3. 词数: 100个左右.

　　（Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about whether money is everything.）

　　IV 写作 (共两节, 满分40分)

　　基础写作 (共1小题, 满分15分)

　　2010上海世博会(Exposition 2010)将使中国成为世界的焦点; 以其 "Better City, Better Life"的主题, 必将吸引世人的目光。

　　[写作内容]

　　请根据以下中文提纲，写一篇短文介绍中国2010年上海世博会：

　　到2010年世界55%的人口将居住在城市, 未来城市生活成为世界关注的对象；

　　作为首个以城市为主题的世博会, 上海世博会将引人注目；

　　参展者将展示城市文明、交流城市发展的经验并探寻城市可持续(sustainable)发展的途径；

　　它将是探讨21世纪城市生活的盛会。

　　[写作要求]

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容

　　[评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　3．

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　“低碳生活”已成为当今最流行的词汇。低碳生活是关系到人类未来的战略选择。“低碳”正在渗透到百姓生活、城市建设、经济发展的各个领域，在我们身边已经有越来越多的人自觉地改变着固有的生活习惯，成为“低碳生活”的践行者。作为中学生，你将如何响应“低碳生活”的号召？

　　（1）请根据上述材料谈谈二氧化碳造成的危害。

　　（2）为了响应过低碳生活的号召，请你介绍几条低碳生活方面的小常识。

　　假如你是李华，请你写一份倡议书，向全社会发出倡议，号召大家积极行动起来，过低碳生活。

　　注意：１、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、完整；

　　　２、词数：120—150。

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　　4． 假如你叫李明， 你有一位英国网友名叫Tom，他听说过中国的故宫，但知之不多，于是给你发来email, 请你向他介绍一下有关故宫的情况。请你根据下面提供的要点给他回一封120字左右的电子邮件：

　　1．故宫（the Palace Museum）是一座用传统材料建造的中国风格的建筑。 中国古代建筑师们通过这座建筑表达了他们的审美观念。建造工作始于1407年，花了20万人14年的时间，于1420年建成。

　　2．它一共有9，999个房间。在中国，9这个数字传统地被认为是吉祥的。

　　3．故宫有着中国历史上5千多年的珍宝（precious treasure）。

　　4．现在，每周星期二，故宫免费向中国学生开放。欢迎他来参观。

　　5．近日，一篇题目为《我家没有宝马车，只有藏书数千卷》的帖子在网易论坛备受好评。帖子的作者是一名重庆高三女生。她说，她之所以上网炫书，是想唤起更多的同龄人“多读书，读好书”。请据此用英语写一篇短文发表自己的观点。

　　注意：

　　1．词数120左右；

　　2．文章开头已为你写好，但不汁入总词数。

　　Recently a post saying that I don't have a BMW car, only a collection of thousands of volumes has been spread on the net．

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　（Recently I’ve had a discussion with my classmates about whether money is everything.）

　　Some students think money is everything. They say,“Money makes the mare go.” If they have lots of money, their dreams will come true, such as living a happy life, having a good house to live in, owing a famous car to drive, and so on. In a word, they can do everything they like with money. And they can also get whatever they want.

　　But I don’t think so. In a way, of course, money is really very important to us all. Without money, we can do nothing and can’t live on. But we must know that money can’t bring us everything . For example, knowledge cannot be brought with money. And one cannot be rich in knowledge unless he works hard. Besides , we can’t buy friendship, either. Moreover, there are still many other things that cannot be bought with money, such as health, life, happiness, love and so on. So we must know clearly that money doesn’t mean everything. Just think, if a person hasn’t these things at all, is his money still useful? Now, do you think money is everything?

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　Fifty-five percent of the world population is expected to live in cities by the year 2010. Therefore, the prospect of future urban life, a subject of global interest, concerns all nations, developed or less developed, and their people. Being the first World Exposition on the theme of city, Exposition 2010 will attract governments and people from across the world, focusing on the theme "Better City, Better Life." During the exposition, participants will display urban civilization to the full extent, exchange their experience of urban development, and explore new approaches to the sustainable urban development. It is widely acknowledged that Expo 2010 Shanghai China will be a great event to explore the full potential of urban life in the 21st century.

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　Everybody,

　　A saying goes that “there’s only one mother earth’’. At present, more pollution has come into existence and our mother earth has become weaker and weaker. One source of the pollution is the over-releasing of carbon dioxide. As is known to all, too much carbon dioxide has caused the climate changes. Moreover, the over releasing of carbon dioxide may result in less rainfall, the global warming and so on.

　　How can we live a low-carbon life to protect our mother earth? Here is some advice:

　　1. Cut off all the electricity except the power supply for lights and the fridge.

　　2. Try walking or cycling instead of driving;

　　3. Don’t buy things with multi-layer packaging;

　　4. Use your own chopsticks when you go to a restaurant;

　　5. Don’t use too much soap when you wash your clothes.

　　So, wake up to live a low-carbon life to protect our planet.Keep the balance of nature. Low-carbon life has aroused much concern of residents. I hope more people will join the low-carbon campaign. Easy as it might be, it can really make an unbelievable difference.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　【解析】

　　4．

　　Dear Tom,

　　It is nice to get your Email.Now let me tell you something about the Palace Museum.

　　The Palace Museum is a building build with traditional materials in Chinese style.Ancient Chinese architects had their ideas of beauty expressed in this building. It took 200.000 workers more than 14 years to build it .It was finished in 1420.

　　The Palace Museum has 9.999 rooms althogether.Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number . As the largest museum in the wourld , the Palace Museum holds cultural treasures from the past 5.000 years of Chinese history. Students from China can visit it in groups free of chanrge every Tuesday.

　　You are welcome to come and have a visit.

　　Yours

　　LiMing

　　【解析】

　　【亮点说明】treasure,提升文章的档次。

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　5．

　　Recently a post saying that I don't have a BMW car, only a collection of thousands of volumes has been spread on the net．

　　The writer of the post is a Senior III girl student of Chongqing, who wishes more of her peers to read more good books. The post attracts many people’s attention and wins their praise soon after its appearance on the Internet.

　　Nowadays there are many people showing off their BMW or wealth that they own. In their eyes, wealth is the only thing they should make every effort to seek and show off because big wealth is the sigh of high social position and privilege. Therefore they give up other ambitions that are more meaningful, especially spiritual or culture ones.

　　It is not wrong of people to pursue wealth but meanwhile they should also try to learn to fulfill their knowledge. A person with a broad as well as wealth is more attractive and admirable.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查开放性作文写作。作文给出了一个话题一篇题目为《我家没有宝马车，只有藏书数千卷》的帖子，只有少数的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。

　　【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子： attracts one’s attention吸引某人的注意力， In one’s eyes在某人眼中, make every effort to do 努力做， show off炫耀， The writer of the post is a Senior III girl student of Chongqing, who wishes more of her peers to read more good books. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句， Nowadays there are many people showing off their BMW or wealth that they own. Therefore they give up other ambitions that are more meaningful, especially spiritual or culture ones. 这两句话也用了定语从句， It is not wrong of people to pursue wealth but meanwhile they should also try to learn to fulfill their knowledge. 这句话用了it做形式主语。

　　考点：考查开放式书面表达