2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达同步训练：5

　　2017届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷5（含解析）

　　1．

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　最近，你校参加了某英文报纸正在开展的题为“中学生课堂注意力”的专栏讨论，并请你代表学校给该英文报纸投稿。下面的表格为你校的调查结果（表中数据为学生人数百分比）。请你根据所提供的信息做简要说明，并根据提示给出改善的建议。（字数140）．

　　中学生课堂注意力集中情况

　　及注意力不能集中的原因：

　　改善注意力的建议：

　　能够集中注意力 40％

　　不能够集中注意力 60％

　　课堂干扰 30％

　　睡眠不足与疲劳 70％

　　教室 通风、明亮

　　课堂 积极参与课堂活动

　　课间 适量活动或适当休息

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　　第二节

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　在当今数字化的时代，不少老师不在进行串门式的家访，而是借助短信、QQ、E-mail、等通讯方式与学生家长沟通。信息时代的教学， 还需要家访吗？请根据下面的文字材料用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，并谈谈你自己的看法。

　　观点一：有必要

　　家访有利于家长和老师更好地沟通，共同努力帮助学生学习；

　　家访可以全方位了解学生，学生能感受到老师的关心。

　　观点二：没必要

　　家访浪费时间和精力；

　　借助短信、网络等与学生家长沟通更加及时方便。

　　注意：

　　1．词数：100-120左右。

　　2．参考词汇：家访：home visits

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　　，, 参加社会实践活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文“An Unforgettable Experience”，以发表在校刊上。

　　工作地点 一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店

　　工作时间 四个星期，每天8小时

　　工作情况 当保洁员（cleaner）,

　　你的体会 遇到了一些没预料到的困难，labor）的意义……

　　注意：1. 必须使用第一人称;

　　2. 不要逐句翻译，可适当扩展，总词数120左右;

　　3. 要求字迹工整，卷面整洁。

　　An Unforgettable Experience

　　4．假如你是李华，是学校爱心俱乐部的成员，英语成绩非常突出，有两年英语家教的经验，认为志愿工作能够使人树立信心，培养良好的交际能力。请根据这则招聘信息所给的中英文提示写一封应聘邮件。参考词汇：家教——tutor

　　A voluntary activity

　　In the winter vacation

　　Five volunteers wanted

　　As English teachers

　　At SOS children’s village

　　5．假定你是西安某一中学高三学生李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到如下的一个帖子:

　　With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students?

　　请你回帖，要点如下： 

　　1. 同意并表示担忧，实际上，学生心理压力不可避免。

　　2. 列出某些学生心理焦虑的现象（如：担心考不好；缺乏自信心；容易发脾气等）；

　　3. 提出应该采取的对策（如积极态度和应对方法）。

　　注意：1. 可适当发挥；

　　2. 词数：不少于100字。

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　　One possible version：

　　Our school has made a survey about how long middle school students can fix their attention in class during each period．The result shows that only 40% of the students can draw their attention to the class, while the rest of them can not concentrate on the lesson．30% of the students think the problem is caused by all kinds of noises in the classroom; the other part of students consider the lack of sleep and tiredness as the major causes．

　　Therefore, we advise that the classroom be bright and the air inside stay fresh．As for students, they should try their best to be active in class in order not to be disturbed by others．During the breaks, they can take some exercises or have a little rest in the classroom．

　　2．

　　One possible

　　version：

　　Are home visits necessary when there are so many ways to communicate with students’ parents?

　　Some people are for home visits. They think home visits will make it easy for parents and teachers to communicate and work more closely together to help students’ learning. The traditional way will give teachers a chance to better understand their students, who thus will feel cared for. However, others hold opposite opinion because they think it is a waste of time and energy. There are many other ways to help students. If they keep in touch with the students’ parents with texting messages, QQ or E-mail, it will be more convenient and save a lot of time.

　　Personally, I think home visits are positive, and that teachers could educate their students effectively through home visits.

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　An Unforgettable Experience

　　During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.

　　The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

　　Although I met with a lot of difficulty in the work, it helped me understand better what labor means. I think it is really a successful experience.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力

　　Dear student union,

　　I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I read it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five.Now I am writing here to apply for this opportunity.

　　First, please allow me to make a brief introduction about myself. I’m Li Hua, a member of the loving heart club in our school, and I have a good command of English. My two-years’ experience as a tutor has taught me that working as a volunteer can build up our confidence and enable us to develop our communication skills, which are a necessity in our social life.

　　When I read your ad, I became fascinated. I believe that being a volunteer teacher at your village is obviously more than just teaching; it is helpful to broaden my horizons and improve my understanding of the world. Besides, by helping those kids, I feel I can make a difference to their future and make a small contribution to society. I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.

　　I’m looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】这是一份应聘书，根据广告内容，可知工作性质是英语老师，时间是寒假，地点是At SOS children’s village，写作时，要围绕这几天展开，还要自我介绍，包括自己的英语方面的优势，相关经历。关键的要写自己为什么要应聘这份工作，要是得到了会怎么做。在句型的选择上更要注意，应该让对方从应聘书中看到你的英语表达能力，可以多使用复杂的高级句型。如I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. 和My two-years’ experience as a tutor has taught me that working as a volunteer can build up our confidence and enable us to develop our communication skills, which are a necessity in our social life.等。

　　5．

　　I can’t agree more with what you said. That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.

　　Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or with their classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

　　As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，先读懂这篇帖子，弄清帖子的内容是关于高三学生的考前压力的问题，再根据给出来的要点来阐述，题目有三个要点，但是不是很具体，考生要根据要点进行拓展发挥，不能有遗漏，内容一定要充实，这就要求增加了难度。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

　　【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，运用了一些词组和好的句子：tend to容易，往往会，because of因为， get along well with 和…相处好，As a matter of fact事实上, turn to 求助于，of vital importance至关重要的. I can’t agree more with what you said.这句话用了宾语从句，That many students are suffering mental problems also worries me. 这句话用了主语从句，It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life, which, in my opinion, everyone will meet in their life.这句话用给了主语从句和非限制性定语从句， Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night.这句话用了状语从句， With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.这句话用了with复合结构。还有范文中使用了First of all, Second, Last but not least,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

　　考点：考查提纲类书面表达