2017届湖北省武汉市高考英语书面表达训练（5）

　　湖北省武汉市2017高考英语书面表达暑假练习（5）及参考范文

　　【陕西省西安市长安一中2017第二次模拟】书面表达（满分30分）

　　假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫的学生，你看到如下内容。请你根据内容、写作要点和要求。

　　写作要点：

　　1. 表明自己的看法；               

　　2. 陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；

　　3. 提出至少两条建议要求：

　　1. 短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。 2. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。

　　3. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。  4. 书写需清晰、工整。书面表达（满分30分）This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting; instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it.

　　In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality.

　　As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　??(Another possible version)

　　Slowstudent,

　　heThis is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, if you use your head a little bit, it is easy to deal with. Let me put it clearer. Now that parents’ meetings bring troubles and unhappiness to you, that would be okay if there were no such kind of meeting. It is impossible for you to forbid your school or your class to hold a parents’ meeting, but you can “forbid” your parents to attend the meeting. How? One way is not telling your parents there will be a parents’ meeting. Another is trying to say something bad about the meeting (say, the meeting is intended for nothing but to collect money) so that your parents hate to go to it. These approaches prove effective, for I am as slow a student as you.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　（2017福建卷）第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

　　如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."

　　- Sir Winston, Churchill

　　内容要求：

　　1．你对该引语的理解：

　　2．你的相关经历：

　　3．恰当的结尾。

　　注意：

　　1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数：

　　2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：

　　3．词数：120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _____________.

　　【考点】考察开放性作文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于开放性作文，要求考生根据丘吉尔的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."发表自己的理解，并举例说明。属于议论文的一种，主要使用第三人称和一般现在时。在讲述各人经历时可以使用过去时。要点：1.该名言告诉我们：面对失败，我们不应该泄气，相反我们应该鼓足勇气充满热情继续努力。2.各人经历：学习骑自行车的例子。3.如果我们不尝试，我们就不可能成功，最重要的是我们要坚持下去。

　　本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

　　【一句多译】

　　回顾这一切，我感觉如果我失去信心，我就不能学会骑自行车了。

　　（1）Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　（2）When I looked back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.

　　【参考范文】

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.

　　Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.

　　【2017高考复习】书面表达

　　目前，我国高中学生英语学习困难的现象很严重，因此，一位即将进入高中学习的女生写信向外籍教师(Bruce)请教。请你根据信的内容和写作要点代替Bruce写封回信。

　　Dear Bruce，

　　I'm writing to ask you for advice on how to avoid becoming a poor English learner in high school.It's said that some students who were not so bad at English in the junior grow poor in it in high school.How I want to remain a good English learner in future！What should I do to achieve my aim？Thank you!

　　Looking forward to your reply!

　　Best wishes!

　　Li Hong

　　写作要点：

　　1．告诉Li Hong她所听说的英语学习困难的情况确实存在，但大多数的高中英语学习困难生都是初中英语成绩太差的学生；

　　2．就如何防止高中英语学习困难现象的产生给Li Hong提出建议。

　　`树立高中能学好英语的信心； 根据高中英语学习的特点，结合身边学习有困难的学生的不足，另提两条建议。

　　利用高中开学前的时间复习初中所学内容；

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Li Hong，

　　Your letter reached me this morning.Now I'd like to share my opinion with you.

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Sincerely hoping you can benefit from the above and will be a successful high school English learner.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Bruce

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear_Li_Hong，

　　Your_letter_reached_me_this_morning.Now_I'd_like_to_share_my_opinion_with_you.

　　Yes，some high school poor English learners really got good English scores in the junior，but most are those who were too bad at English at that time.So don't

　　be afraid of falling behind in future.Here are some tips for you.

　　First of all，be confident that you can learn English well in the senior.Also，review the knowledge learned in the junior before the new school life begins.Besides，make necessary mental preparations for the hard learning in the senior.With more difficult English textbooks，you should preview the text and review in time what has been learned，especially the new words.

　　Sincerely_hoping_you_can_benefit_from_the_above_and_will_be_a_successful_high_school_English_learner.

　　Best_wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Bruce

　　【2017高考复习】书面表达

　　随着网络在人们日常生活中的广泛使用，好友和家人过生日或重大节日时，越来越多的学生喜欢通过发电子贺卡来表达他们良好的祝愿。请根据以下提示，简述使用电子贺卡的优点，并结合实际谈谈自己的看法。

　　1．使用便捷，传递速度快，不受时间和空间的限制；

　　2．形式多样，生动有趣。除图象外，还可以传递动画和声音；

　　3．节约资源，利于环保。

　　注意：1.文章需包括上述要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；

　　2．词数：100左右；

　　3．参考词汇：电子贺卡electronic card。

　　With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life，more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.

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　　【参考范文】

　　With_the_wide_use_of_the_Internet_in_our_daily_life，more_ and_ more _students_tend_to_send_electronic_cards_to_friends_and_family_members_on_the_occasions_of_their_birthdays_or_festivals.

　　Compared with paper cards，electronic ones have many advantages.Firstly，it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well，without being limited by time and space.Secondly，they take various forms such as pictures，music and animation，which are more interesting and lively.Most importantly，electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.

　　For me，due to reminders，in QQ，I've never missed any chances to say“Happy birthday！”to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards.I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

　　【2017高考复习】书面表达

　　随着人民生活水平的不断提高，越来越多的人加入了“有车一族”，可是随之而来的不便和污染也越来越明显。各大城市均饱尝了堵车之痛。北京市也在广泛征集治堵良方，请根据下面图中的相关信息，结合自己的理解，写一封倡议书，表达一下自己的观点，倡导绿色出行。词数100左右。

　　Let's Go Cycling!

　　As is depicted in the picture above，we can see that the streets are filled with so many cars that the traffic jams happen very frequently，which has very bad influence on the life of the people.

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　　【参考范文】

　　Let's Go Cycling!

　　As_is_depicted_in_the_picture_above，we _can _see_ that_ the_ streets_ are_ filled

　　_with_so_many_cars_that_the_traffic_jams_happen_very_frequently，which_ has_ very _bad _influence _on_ the_ life_ of_ the_ people.

　　Nowadays we Chinese people are living a comparatively rich life.People buy cars to go out very conveniently.But what we have to mention is that so many cars on the road might not be a good thing for the city traffic.Sometimes it is easy to get jammed.Always using cars is not good for health and it produces to some degree air pollution.

　　The bicycle is a Chinese traditional stereotype.Many people like to go cycling.Cycling is recreation，a sport，and a means of transport.The bicycle is an efficient means of transportation.In fact，cycling is more efficient than any other method of travel！It is absolutely an energysaving means of transportation.

　　Let's go cycling!