2017届高考英语一轮循环写作周周练：第16周 （半）开放作文（新人教版含解析）

　　第十六周　(半)开放作文

　　[学审题谋篇]

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　　(2016·海口高三第一次适应性测试)为了营造一种“多读书，读好书”的良好氛围，我班将举行一次主题班会，要求以“A good book can affect our life”为主题作演讲，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书，并谈谈自己的感悟。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Boys and girls，

　　That’s all. Thank you!

　　1．审题

　　(半)开放作文的审题最为关键，审好题相当于成功了一半。审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；②定人称；③定时态。

　　如本文为演讲稿，属于应用文；以第一和第三人称为主；时态主要是一般现在时。

　　2．谋篇

　　(半)开放作文的关键是定主题，然后根据主题列出要点和提纲。对于命题式(半)开放作文，首先准确理解题目意思，抓住题目中的关键词，然后结合实际生活组织材料。对于图画式(半)开放作文，要首先准确描述图画的内容，其次对其寓意深层解读，最后结合实际生活进行联想，发表看法。

　　如本文为命题式(半)开放作文，首先要介绍自己读过的一本好书，然后说明这本书好在哪里，自己从中得到了何种体会，对自己有何影响，最后呼吁大家“多读书，读好书”。

　　[学增分亮点]

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　　[满分范文]

　　Boys and girls，

　　①As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. ②A good book can affect our life in one way or another. ③My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. ④It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.

　　⑤From the book, I learned that whenever we come across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. ⑥Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out.

　　⑦Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. ⑧To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, let’s read more good books!

　　That’s all. Thank you!

　　[满分缘由]

　　1．结构布局

　　本文可分为三段：

　　第一段：介绍自己读过的一本好书，并简述书的内容；

　　第二段：介绍自己读书的体会；

　　第三段：介绍读书的好处并号召大家一起多读好书。

　　2．亮点词汇

　　touch one’s heart, overcome, come across, give in, be supposed to, wash one’s soul, meaningful

　　3．亮点句式

　　第①句包含as引导的非限制性定语从句；

　　第③句包含as引导的限制性定语从句；

　　第⑤句包含that引导的宾语从句，其中还包括whenever引导的时间状语从句；

　　第⑦句包含not only ... but also句式。

　　[句式改写]

　　1．用it作形式主语改写句①

　　It_is_once_said_by_Francis_Bacon_that_reading_makes_a_full_man.

　　2．用倒装句改写句⑦

　　Not_only_can_reading_improve_our_ability_to_understand_the_world,_but_also_wash_our_souls.

　　3．用状语从句改写句⑧

　　Let’s read_more_good_books_so_that_we_can_live_an_enjoyable_and_meaningful_life.

　　[写满分作文]

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　　(2016·河南省高考适应性测试)日前，你校英语俱乐部以“If you could do one thing to change China for the better, what would you do？”为话题向全校学生征文。请你写一篇英语短文参加此次征文活动。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．文中不得出现自己真实的信息。

　　[要求]

　　请用虚拟语气、定语从句、it’s time that ...、状语从句、倒装、强调句型、宾语从句完成作文。

　　参考范文：

　　If I could do one thing to change China for the better, I would make every effort to protect our environment.

　　To begin with, I would rather do everything (that) I can to shut down the polluting factories in no time, which can prevent the situation going from bad to worse. Moreover, it’s time that people’s environmental awareness should be raised. In the long run, however, only if we develop our country in an efficient and scientific way can we improve our environment thoroughly.

　　In reality, it is our joint efforts that we can depend on to change our motherland for the better. I sincerely hope that we can devote as much as possible to making a more beautiful and harmonious China!