2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（14）

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）

　　【专项突破】短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1

　　Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and that had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “I’ve just got one more thing achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I haven’t had time for social activities. I think it’s important to have a balance in study and a social life, so I’m going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful I’ll make some new friends.”

　　We will follow Xie Lei’s progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.

　　Passage 2

　　Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning Only with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well.

　　Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers and our hard work. They should polite Co teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. They must be responsible on their teaching and help students. If both sides treat10 each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient.

　　Passage 3

　　The news which the English Entrance Examination will be reformed has caused a big “earthquake” in our country. Many people, included students, are for it. But there are also some people are against it. Then, is it better to do so or not? Personally, I think the reform has between advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it can reduce students’ learn burden and enable English to return back to its true function. On the other hand, it will cause students to spend less time on studying English and to attached less importance to English. If so, students will not have a good knowledge of English. What’s more, if students don’t have so a good ability, they will not be able to broaden our horizon and meet the future challenges.

　　Passage 4

　　Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(颁布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulate the industrial punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together, their environment will become more better.

　　Passage 5

　　One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station．It was quite different

　　from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no

　　fixed seats．

　　Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and

　　sentences as possible here．Curious and excited, we walked around the station and looked

　　everywhere, search for any information in English．Whenever an English word comes into sight, the

　　class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world．With the Chinese translation

　　and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease．

　　Now, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go．

　　Passage 6

　　Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at

　　home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.

　　I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.

　　Passage 7

　　This afternoon 1 went to see my grandfather by a bus．It was very crowded and I had to stand．Besides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms．In front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleeping．I heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woman would blame the man．Beyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quiet．This uncle must very tired because of hard work．”The young man must have heard the word．His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once．

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十四）答案

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　　we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.

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　　Passage 2

　　Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning. Only

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　　Passage 3

　　1. which-that

　　2. included-including

　　3. people后加who

　　4. between-both

　　5. learn-learning

　　6. back删掉

　　7. on-in 或删掉on

　　8. attached-attach

　　9. so-such

　　10. our-their

　　Passage 4

　　1.became改为become

　　2.people后加are

　　3.breathe改为breathing

　　4.the改为a

　　5.law改为laws

　　6. what改为that/which

　　7.by改为of

　　8.or改为and

　　9.their改为our

　　10.去掉more或more改为much

　　Passage 5

　　71.hold改为held

　　72.familiar to改为familiar with

　　73.or改为and

　　74.told前加were

　　75.here改为there

　　76.search改为searching

　　77.comes改为came

　　78.cheers前面the去掉79.vividly改为vivid

　　80.where改为wherever

　　Passage 6

　　1.have改为has

　　2.and改为or

　　3.am后the去掉

　　4.anything改为ssomething

　　5.good改为well

　　6.what改为that

　　7.order后加to

　　8.rule改为rules

　　9.the改为a

　　10.to改为for

　　Passage 7 This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by a bus. It was very crowded and I

　　had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In front of

　　Beside

　　holding

　　her, a young man occupies two seats, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy

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　　curious asking his mother, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps

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　　the woman would blame the man. Beyond her expectations, the woman answered with

　　my

　　a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must∧ very tired because of hard work.” The young

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　　man must have heard the word. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.

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　　and