（五年高考）2016届高考英语专题复习：专题18 书面表达（全国通用）

　　专题十八 书面表达

　　2015～2011年各省市高考题

　　考点一　提纲类

　　Writing 1　(2015·新课标全国 )

　　假定你是李华你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介

　　1.栏目介绍。

　　稿件内容；

　　稿件长度：约400词；

　　交稿日期：6月28日前。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　开头语已为你写好。

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　I'd

　　like

　　to

　　ask

　　you

　　to

　　write

　　an

　　article

　　for

　　our

　　school's

　　English

　　newspaper.

　　The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have our article before June 28?

　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours，

　　Li

　　Hua

　　Writing 2　(2015·新课标全国)

　　假如你是李华计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件邀她一同前往内容包括：

　　出发及返回时间；

　　活动：包饺子、表演节目等。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　结语已为你写好。

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We'll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We'll also spend some fun time together singing，dancing and playing games，which will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o'clock in the afternoon.

　　If you are able to come with us，please let us know and we'll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

　　Looking

　　forward

　　to

　　your

　　reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li

　　Hua

　　Writing 3　(2017·福建 )

　　如何理解“成功”不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)按要求用英语写一篇短文。

　　o loss of enthusiasm.”

　　—Sir Winston Churchill

　　内容要求：

　　你对该引语的理解；

　　你的相关经历；

　　恰当的结尾。

　　注意：1.短文开头已给出不计入总词数；

　　文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

　　词数：120左右。

　　【思路点拨】

　　这是一篇话题类作文。①要求根据引语写出对成功的理解。②需要写的话题已经给出需要我们结合自己的相关经历进行写作。③过去的经历用一般过去时写作时注意准确运用时态上下文120词左右不要太多也不要太少。

　　【参考范文】

　　shouldn't get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart.

　　Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick to it.

　　Writing 4　 (2017·大纲全国)

　　一家英语报社向中学生征文主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

　　家庭；

　　工作；

　　业余生活。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　开头语已为你写好。

　　【思路点拨】

　　主题：“十年后的我”；

　　内容要点：家庭、工作、业余生活三方面。

　　段落层次：适当插入连接词使文章层次分明并且增加适当的细节以使行文连贯内容充实。

　　亮点说明：适当使用多种句式结构避免句式单一；恰当使用高级词汇避免尽用“儿科词汇”以增加文章亮点提高文章档次。

　　【参考范文】

　　－eight years old by then.I will have my own familype I'll work in a computer company as a program designer.I'll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues.I'll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free time，I'll continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games.On my holidays，I'll travel around the world.In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.

　　Writing 5　(2017·重庆)

　　青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为礼物贵在心意应为之付出时间和精力。

　　假设

　　●赞同Susan的看法

　　你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么

　　该礼物的意义

　　期待大家回复

　　注意：1.词数不少于80；

　　符合语言规范；

　　开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

　　【参考范文】

　　ne you love.It does't matter whether it is expensive or not.What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.

　　Years ago，I received a gift from a friend on my birthday，who is now living far away.It delighted me at the sight of it.It was a piece of paper cutting，a Chinese traditional art.With the gift，he included a letter，in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself.It took him several weeks to learn to make it.That's why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.

　　Now，it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom.Whenever I look at it，I couldn't help thinking of my friend.However far away we are，we feel close to each other.So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one.

　　Writing 6　(2017·重庆)

　　请结合材料按要求用英文写作。

　　要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；

　　紧扣材料有明确的观点；

　　词数不少于60。

　　【思路点拨】

　　此类文章类型主要以论述的方式为主需要围绕所提供材料的主题进行举例论证表达自己的观点和看法本文属于半开放式作文让学生举例并对引文的观点进行论证。该类题目要求学生灵活处理所给材料做到综合分析辩证

　　【参考范文】

　　y.I think as a child, young or old, we should tell them something about our friends, how we are going in our study or work.At the same time, we can share some interesting experiences with them, thus reducing their concern about us，including our daily life.What's more, we can pour out our troubles facing us, releasing our pressure from different aspects.After all, parents are our best friends.So please communicate more with them.

　　Writing 7　(2017·浙江)

　　请以“One Thing I'm Proud of”为题用英语写一篇～个词的短文记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：

　　2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。

　　注意：文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。

　　One Thing I'm Proud of

　　【思路点拨】

　　写作之前考生需认真审题明确写作要求可划分写作要点如下：1.令自己得意的事是什么及叙述事情发展过程(注意时态为过去时)。2.从中得到的启发(一般现在时)。同时注意关联词的选用。

　　【参考范文】

　　One Thing I'm Proud of

　　The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skilful they were，I was determined to be just as good.Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.

　　I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”

　　Writing 8　(2017·陕西)

　　假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。

　　写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。

　　注意：1.短文词数不少于100；

　　开头部分已写好不计入总词数；

　　不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　－year－old middle school student

　　【思路点拨】

　　本书面表达要点一

　　【参考范文】

　　－year－old

　　middle

　　school

　　student.I have been k.Feeling quite sorry for that，I began to think about what to do to help.

　　Last Sunday，when my parents went out shopping，I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that，I swept and mopped the floors.

　　At this very moment，my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was，I never felt so happy.

　　考点二　图画、图表类

　　Writing 1　(2015·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题给校刊“英语角”写一篇英语稿件。

　　注意：词数不少于60。

　　提示 a piece of dough

　　面人 dough figurine

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇图画作文用图画的形式展示了一个活动过程。写作时要认真审读四幅图画理清其内在的逻辑关系交代清楚活动的时间、地点、人物和活动的具体内容；同时运用恰当的过渡词把四幅图画的内容连成一个有机的整体。

　　【参考范文】

　　When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.

　　We hope we can have more activities of this kind!

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文注意使用了过渡词汇first等来衔接句子和段落使文章更有条理行文连贯。

　　时态把握准确主要运用了一般过去时文章上下文时态保持一致。

　　恰当运用了高级结构如非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, ；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table...；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, 等让文章靓丽起来。

　　Writing 2　(2015·福建)

　　请阅读下面图画按要求用英120左右的短文。

　　内容包括：

　　描述画面；

　　概述其含义；

　　谈谈个人感想。

　　凿壁偷光

　　注意：1.短文开头已给出不计入总词数；

　　可适当发挥使文章内容充实、行文连贯；

　　文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：凿钻：bore

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇漫画类作文要求根据图画展示内容写一篇120词左右的短文。

　　写作要点：1.描述图画(一般现在时)

　　概述其含义

　　3.谈个人感想(根据这个成语想到自身如何去做)

　　【参考范文】

　　ay of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

　　This is a well－known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boyhbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is：spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文简明扼要要点齐全信息丰富条理清晰。灵活运用了高级词汇如：shabby, t, acquire knowledge, get discouraged, count等，体现出作者丰富的词汇积累能力。句型上，运用了强调句型，丰富了句式结构；最后一句起到了画龙点睛的作用，是一篇上等佳作。

　　Writing 3　(2015·江苏)

　　请阅读下面文字及图表并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左

　　1.The other day, a netizen(网民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo. It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane, －up(点赞) given to the old lady,

　　2.Some riders of e－bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions, c lights and other vehicles. Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic. Thus the avoidable road accidents become unavoidable.

　　3.From 2005 to 2017, the total number of private cars in China rose sharply from 32 million to 154 million. Currently, China had 15% of the world's total vehicles.

　　【写作内容】

　　用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

　　结合上述信息简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；

　　根据你的分析从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

　　【写作要求】

　　写作过程中不能直接引用原文

　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

　　不必写标题。

　　【评分标准】

　　内容完整语言规范语篇连贯词数适当。

　　【思路点拨】

　　书面表达部分属于给材料作文的类型提供了文字和图表相结合的三份材料要求考生在概要叙述材料的基础上分析导致交通问题的主要原因并从社会规范和个人行为两方面讨论自己得到的启示。

　　【参考范文】

　　y also threaten people's lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

　　Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large－scale construction of roads and highways, se of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

　　In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

　　【亮点点评】

　　文章要点全语法知识应用灵活且使用得当堪称佳作。文中开头就使用not only...but also 句式使行文非常连贯。高级词汇in spite of, 等强调句式虚拟语气的应用等都彰显了作者的扎实的英语功底。

　　Writing 4　(2017·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华请根据以下四幅图的先后顺

　　注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。

　　词数不少于 60。

　　【思路点拨】

　　文章应包含以下几点内容：1.爸爸与“我”和妈妈道别出差； 2.“我”发现妈妈生病；3.在“我”的精心照顾下妈妈恢复了健康；4.爸爸归来对“我”进行了表扬。

　　【参考范文】

　　went on a business trip.He would be away for three days.Just the next morning，I found my mother wasn't feeling well.She had a cold.I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.With my special care，my mother recovered quickly.When my father came back home，my mother told him what had happened.He praised me for what I had done.

　　I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.

　　Writing 5　(2017·福建)

　　孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画

　　内容要求：

　　描述漫画内容；

　　分析漫画所揭示的问题；

　　提出你的看法。

　　注意：1.短文开头已给出不计入总词数；

　　考生可适当发挥使文章内容充实、连贯；

　　词数120左右；

　　文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：pave the way

　　ree walking on a long red carpet.

　　【思路点拨】

　　(第一段)漫画内容：对漫画的描述应紧扣主题——现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖与主题有关的要深挖与主题无关的尽量不予理睬；

　　(第二段)分析问题：首先用一句话简要揭示图画中的现象——孩子是“三口之家”的中心一切围着孩子转。然后

　　3.(第三段)提出你的看法：本段应该包括三个层次：观点：过度溺爱不利于孩子健康成长；②对策：鼓励和放手让孩子做力所能及的事情培养孩子的技能和良好的习惯、磨炼孩子的意志、树立其正确的人生观和世界观；③结论：只有这样做才能培养出自食其力和健康成长的孩子。

　　【参考范文】

　　e

　　can

　　see

　　a

　　family

　　of

　　three

　　walking

　　on

　　a

　　long

　　red

　　carpet.The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating.

　　It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents.Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

　　Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion，overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development.Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

　　Writing 6　(2017·福建)

　　假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。

　　内容要求：

　　2.发表个人感想。

　　注意：1.短文标题与开头已给出不计入总词数；

　　考生可适当发挥使文章内容充实、连贯；

　　词数120左右；

　　文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：告示牌sign

　　Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

　　【思路点拨】

　　审题：

　　审体裁：看图作文。

　　审时态：

　　3.审要点：①描写内容；②个人感想。

　　【参考范文】

　　Mind Your Behavior in Public Places

　　of spring，with the sun shining and birds singing.When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around，something unpleasant caught my eye.A young couple in a boat were eating，talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.What's worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake，totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.What a shame!

　　Such behavior left me deep in thought.If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did，the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.

　　Writing 7　(2011·江苏)

　　右面这幅照片展现了女儿为

　　你的短文应包含以下内容：

　　1.描述照片内容如情景、人物、动作等等；

　　结合自身实际谈谈你的感想；

　　举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

　　注意：1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示作必要的发挥想象。

　　词数150左右。开头已经写好不计入总词数。

　　作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　r years，but the load of parents has received little attention，especially from their own children.

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文为看图作文考查角度独到新颖(为家长减负)。描述图片内容时应使用第三人称在写自己的感想和为家长减负时应使用第一人称时态为一般现在时。

　　文章段落清晰可分为三部分(1)描述图片内容；(2)自己的感想；(3)举例说明自己为家长减负做了什么。

　　【参考范文】

　　The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom.Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work，the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.In response，the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

　　All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.But，totally engaged in my own study，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share mother's daily burden.The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student.

　　考点三　应用类

　　Writing 1　(2015·北京)

　　假设你是红星中学高三学生李华请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括：

　　介绍训练营的相关内容(例如：时间地点参加者等)；

　　说明你打算参加的原因；

　　询问对方的意向。

　　注意：1.词数不少于50；

　　开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。

　　提示词：龙舟训练营

　　Dragon Boat Training Camp

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇典型的邀请信重点是李华邀请美国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营要按照邀请信的格式进行写作即发出邀请介绍活动的时间地点内容参加

　　【参考范文】

　　I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.

　　This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I'll send you more information.

　　Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文结构I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I wonder if you'd like to go with me.文中的时态把握较好使用了一般将来时和一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情。

　　Writing 2　(2015·四川)

　　假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在Mandarin)水平她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

　　表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

　　说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

　　给出讲好普通话的两点建议；

　　提出你学习英语的具体需求。

　　注意：1.词数120左右开头语已为你写好；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

　　This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

　　Li Xia

　　【思路点拨】

　　考查应用类作文。在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次考生要能够抓中心列要点列出写作提纲。写作文时一定要切题抓住中心紧扣要点.然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体可分成三段写1、 2；第二段写要点3；第三段写要点4, 以及希望得到对方的回信。

　　【参考范文】

　　This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am quite interested in it.I think I'm fit for it.As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.In addition，I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.So I'm quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

　　Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well，you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday.As the saying goes, practice makes perfect.Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese，see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes.Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

　　In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward.It is just what I want.I'm eager to improve my English.So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

　　Hope for your early reply!

　　Yours，

　　Li Xia

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全结构完整。使用多种句式如定语从句：I am Chinese, hich means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life；表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。

　　Writing 3　(2015·天津)

　　假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示写一封邮件与Chris联系并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。

　　(1)自我介绍；

　　(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；

　　(3)询问对方的其他需求。

　　注意：1.词数不少于100；

　　请适当加入细节使内容充实、行文连贯。

　　参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Union

　　Yours，

　　Li Jin

　　【参考范文】

　　I'm Li Jin, Chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang Middle School.Now I have a piece of good news to tell you.

　　Our school will donate 5，000 copies of different valuable books to your class, which include popular science books, classic works and so on.Popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way and they can help you understand science subjects better and arouse your curiosity about scientific discoveries.Classic works present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer you joy and excitement, but also encourage you to think critically.

　　We will take these books to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year.

　　If you have more needs, please let me know as soon as possible.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Jin

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全较好地完成了规定的任务同时也应用了较多的语to tell you作后置定语非限制性定语从句which include...连接词and的灵活运用连接并列谓语引导的条件状语从句等。总之全文结构紧凑句际间连接顺畅是一篇难得的佳作。

　　Writing 4　(2015·陕西)

　　假定你是李华在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事并根据写和写作要求写一封应征邮件。

　　Volunteers Wanted

　　－17 provide service for Talent Show，Speech Contest，and English Debate.If you are interested，please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.

　　写作要点：

　　表达写作意图；

　　陈述应征目的

　　3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。

　　写作要求：

　　邮件词数不少于100；

　　开头和结尾部分已写好不计入总词数；

　　可根据情况增加细节使行文连贯；

　　不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　I'm Li Hua，a student from Class 2, Grade 3.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇应用文要求根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。文章要求明确思路清晰是学生熟悉的话题。

　　写作要点：1.表达写信意图(申请“英语文化节”学生自愿者)

　　陈述应征目的(如：提高英语能力交流能力等)

　　说明应征条件(性格能力等方面)

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear

　　Ms

　　Chen

　　I'm

　　Li

　　Hua，a

　　student

　　from

　　Class

　　2，Grade

　　3.I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

　　I really want to obtain

　　this precious opportunity because，by offering，my service，I will be able to improve my organisational ability，communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

　　As an outgoing girl，I get along well with my classmates.Besides，I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class，which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.

　　I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.

　　Looking

　　forward

　　to

　　your

　　reply.

　　Yours

　　truly，

　　Li

　　Hua

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全完全符合应征邮件的要求层次分明脉络清晰。开门见山地表达了写信的意图并对自己应征目的和应征条件分别进行了阐述同时在文章最后表达了自己的信心和愿望。文章中的by offering my servicethat...，以及非限制性定语从句的使用都是文中的亮点所在；同时等高级词汇运用也体现了作者深厚的语言功底。总之是一篇不可多得的佳作。

　　Writing 5　(2015·重庆)

　　是一个面wild release)，即把书放在指定地点由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享(controlled release)即直接传递给另一位参与者。

　　假设你是李华请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：

　　表明写信目的

　　选择一种分享方式

　　简述做出该选择的理由

　　希望了解更多信息

　　注意：(1)词数不少于80；

　　(2)书信格式及开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

　　【思路点拨】

　　考查属于书信类作文。首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次要列好提纲。一、表明写信目的：申请参加该活动(添加得知消息)；二、选择一种分享方式：二者选一；三、阐述理由；四、书信结尾(添加希望)。

　　【参考范文】

　　ple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.

　　You've introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release.Of the two，the latter wins my favor.By means of controlled release，I only need to deliver books to other participants，not only are books shared but also it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.

　　If you could provide more specific information，I would be well

　　grateful.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文要点齐全结构完整。使用多种短语和高级句式如not only...but also；build up；分词作状语：Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide；定语从句：I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading

　　Writing 6　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定你是李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意请给该校写封信询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

　　注意：1.词数100左右。

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　参考词汇：住宿accommodation

　　【思路点拨】

　　内容要点：

　　参加为期六周的英语班

　　询问：

　　(1)课程开始时间、每周课时

　　(2)每班人数

　　(3)学费、住宿

　　合适的结尾

　　【参考范文】

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad，and I'd like to know something more about your six－week English course.First？Besides also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　Writing 7　(2017·天津)

　　假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示给他写封邮件：

　　表示欢迎

　　介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如天气饮食等)

　　介绍本班情况

　　希望Chris做哪些事情以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊

　　注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。

　　可适当加入细节使内容充实、行文连贯。

　　词数不少100；开头已给出不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：交换生

　　exchange student

　　I'm Li Jin，monitor of Class One，Grade Eleven.

　　Yours，

　　Li Jin

　　【参考范文】

　　I'm

　　Li

　　Jin，monitor

　　of

　　Class

　　One，Grade

　　Eleven.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.You're welcome to stay with us.

　　Our school is located in a northern city of China，where you can taste many kinds of delicious food，because it is well famous for its snacks.Our city witnesses four different seasons，plenty of sunshine and good rainfall，but in winter you may feel a little cold.

　　Our class is made up of 50 lively boys and girls，who are warm and generous and ready to offer help.They are very friendly and easy to get along with.You will have a good time and get used to the life soon.

　　Yours，

　　Li

　　Jin

　　Writing 8　(2017·陕西)

　　假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。

　　写作要点：

　　1.表示对客人的欢迎；

　　介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等)；

　　表达对客人的祝愿。

　　写作要求：

　　词数不少于100；

　　称呼已经给出请写欢迎词正文；

　　不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是应用文写作写一篇欢迎词。

　　内容要点：

　　(1)欢迎

　　(2)活动介绍(目的内容等)

　　(3)祝愿

　　人称：代表学校欢迎国外代表团故应用第一人称I或者we。

　　时态：一般现在时

　　【参考范文】

　　On behalf of our school，I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.

　　As scheduled，we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The programme consists of the following activities：recitation begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Centre.

　　Dear guests，you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.

　　I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.

　　Writing 9　(2017·新课标全国)

　　假定你是李华从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

　　内容主要包括：

　　自我介绍(包括英语能力)；

　　参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；

　　希望获准。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　Regards，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English.What is more，I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

　　Looking forward to your reply!

　　Regards，

　　Li

　　Hua

　　Writing 10　(2011·大纲全国)

　　假定你是李华正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程遇到一些困难希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定你需书面预约请按下列要点写一封信：

　　本人简介；

　　求助内容：

　　3.约定时间；

　　你的联系方式(Email：；Phone：12345678)。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　结束语已为你写好。

　　Look forward to your reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.I'm writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note－taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com，12345678.

　　Look

　　forward

　　to

　　your

　　reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li

　　Hua

　　考点四　开放、半开放类

　　Writing 1　(2015·湖北)

　　请根据以下提示并结合具体事例用英语写一篇短文。

　　注意：1.无须写标题；

　　除诗歌外文体不限；

　　内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　词数不少于120如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】

　　e learn the meaning of the phrase “pick up”，our first reaction is what it means and how we can use it.Such a question keeps us going on learning.Then come the following questions: can we find a sentence where we can use it? Or can we find a dictionary to look it up? After the questions being put forward one by one，our actions go further and further，until we get a good command of it at last.So when you are beginning to learn something，don't be shy to ask questions，only with the questions can we have the inspiration to learn something new or do better than before.

　　Writing 2　(2015·安徽)

　　某英文杂志正在举办以 “Fancy yourself as an interviewer” 为主题的征文活动请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview” 为题写一篇英语短文。

　　内容包括：

　　采访的对象；

　　采访的原因；

　　想提的问题。

　　注意：1.词数120左右；

　　可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

　　短文的标题已给出不计入总词数。

　　A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇命题材料作文作文的写作要点已经给出考生需要根据提示进行写作必须涵盖所有要点还要注意语篇的连贯性。注意使用高级词汇和定语从句、倒装、强调等重点语法知识。词数在120左右标题不计入总词数。注意行文的连贯性不能出现与本人有关的信息。

　　【参考范文】

　　A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

　　Liwei.

　　I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

　　If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

　　【亮点点评】

　　范文使用了一些重点句型：定语从句I would原因状语从句because he is not only the first Chinese...；宾语从句①I could learn a great deal from him about ittronaut and how he was trained；条件状语从句If I could interview him；非限制性定语从句which must be very interesting等显示了扎实的语法功底也使作文的句式变得多样化；范文还使用了一些固定搭配和固定短语：not only...but also...；one of the...；the first to do sth, ；a great deal；such...as等使作文的内容得到了丰富；范文注意使用not only...but also, 和finally等来衔接句子使范文显得语意连贯、衔接紧凑。

　　Writing 3　(2015·浙江)

　　在班级活动中当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人还是尊重大多数同学的When I Have a Different Opinion”为题用英语与一篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下：

　　从以上两种做法中选择一种；

　　以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

　　注意：短文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则按考试作弊行为认定。

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇开放式写作属于议论文的范畴。首先确定人称以第一人称为主表达自己的观点时以一般现在时为主讲述具体事例时以一般过去时为主。主要内容分为两部分：1.首先明确自己的观点：坚持自己的观点2.以具体事例阐述你这么选择的理由。写作时注意用词准确句际间连贯性要强使上下文衔接浑然一体。

　　【参考范文】

　　When I Have a Different Opinion

　　g so，I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

　　Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a good time that day.Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

　　【亮点点评】

　　本文结构清晰要点全面层次清楚。写作中使用了较to deal with...，doing so，where to go，going to等引导的时间状语从句引导的对比句引导的原因状语从句连接的并列结构等。

　　Writing 4　(2015·湖南)

　　请以老师当众表扬你为话题用下面所给句子开头续写一篇英语短文。

　　注意：1. 续写词数不少于120个；

　　不

　　【参考范文】

　　When I was young, I was very shy. I didn't dare to speak in public. When the teacher asked me to answer a question, I was always too nervous to answer it, which made me very sad.

　　One day, the teacher asked me to come to his office, where he told me to recite a text. I recited it fluently. The teacher praised me and told me I would recite it the next day before my classmates. I told him that I was too nervous, but he insisted that I should do it. The next morning, I was asked to recite the text that I had prepared. Although I did poorly, the teacher praised me very much. I was so proud of myself that day.

　　After that, I was frequently praised before my classmates and began to gain confidence. I tried even harder and the teacher praised me more. Eventually，I overcame my shyness. It was the teacher's praise that made me become a better student.

　　Writing 5　(2017·湖北)

　　请根据以下提示并结合具体事例用英语写一篇短文。

　　sible member of the society.

　　注意：1.无须写标题；

　　除诗歌外文体不限；

　　内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　词数不少于120如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】

　　It isn't hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation.Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.Compared with the escaped driver，I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society，I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　Writing 6　(2017·山东)

　　某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

　　2.Where there's a will，there's a way.

　　注意：1.词数：120～150；

　　文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

　　参考词汇：谚语 proverb

　　【参考范文】

　　Where there's a will,

　　I can't agree more with the view.In our daily life，we will face all kinds of challenges and difficulties.As long as we possess a strong will to get through such hurdles instead of running away from them，we will possess success and a brilliant future.

　　Take myself for example.I was born in a poor family，and my parents are both laid－off workers.I do cherish the educational opportunity my parents offer to me and I always adopt the motto—“Where there is a will to serve as a reminder.Although I meet with huge barriers，I am going ahead while at school.For example，I am buried under piles of textbooks and study around the clock to prepare for the College Entrance Examination.Through my constant efforts，I believe I can change not only my own fate but also the worrying situation of my family.

　　Therefore，I firmly believe that our future depends on a strong will.

　　Writing 7　(2017·重庆)

　　请结合材料按要求用英文写作。

　　；my phone falls

　　要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；

　　紧扣材料有明确的观点；

　　词数不少于60。

　　【参考范文】

　　ugh；my phone falls

　　Personally，it is completely wrong of him to behave with such an attitude towards others and life.As a matter of fact，none of us can live alone in society.We all depend on others sometimes to some degree.If everyone does and thinks as he does，he'll not live any longer in the world.

　　I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need.Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble.Otherwise we'll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later.That is what the saying goes：“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.

　　Writing 8　(2017·湖南)

　　请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。

　　内容：1.自己或他人的一次经历；

　　你的感受。

　　注意：1.必须使用所给4个关键词；

　　2.词数不少于120个；

　　不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【思路点拨】

　　本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文考生需根据题中已给出的四个关键词“match”和“result”写一篇英语短文。写作之前考生需认真阅读题目要求确定写作要点：自己或他人的一次经历；2.自己的感受。在行文中考生应做到详略得当结构清晰。同时为了使行文连贯考生应注意恰当使用连接词。此外考生应能尽量使用一些高级词汇或复杂

　　【参考范文】

　　was chosen to be a member of the football team of Grade 3 and sent to take part in the school football match.I was excited believing I would earn the most scores.But in the first round I hurt my leg and I had to give up the game.I was sad to be a loser.My best friend Tom came up to me and said，“You are great! You still played for a few minutes even after your leg hurt.You are the really winner.”I couldn't believe my ears.For me the one scoring the most is the really winner.But Tom said “the one who still tries his best in spite of bad conditions is the real winner.You know，with the determination，you will change the result sooner or later.”

　　I am deeply impressed by his words.I want to say to him “Thank you.”

　　Writing 9　(2011·安徽)

　　某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题用英语写一篇短文。谈谈自己的一些做法。

　　要求：1.词数100左右；

　　短文

　　【思路点拨】

　　本篇书面表达为话题作文试题只给出话题并未给出具体的写作细节为开放性写作。写好此文需注意四点：一是注意人称、时态的正确使用。二是要详略得当如谈自己如何解决学习中遇到的困难考生最有话可说但切忌长篇大论只需作简要的介绍即可。三是写作时要适当地增加细节恰当地使用连接过渡词以使行文连

　　【参考范文】

　　My Approach to Difficulties in Learning

　　school students，we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning.Everyone has their own way to deal with them.Here I would like to share mine.

　　When I am faced with a difficulty，I usually choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages.In this way，I can not only work it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.

　　However，when it is something beyond my competence，I turn to my classmates or teachers for help.Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice.As a result，I have made steady progress in my studies.

　　1.写作题材突出实用特色以配合新课标理念。会从学生熟悉的或亲身感受的生活中选材考生会有话可说有理可依。

　　贴近生活、贴近时代但不一

　　3.命题形式仍以提示性写作为主但会创设更加真实的情景。

　　高考写作话题的重点：校园生活文娱活动同学或师生关系语言和文化学习及交流环境保护和交通安全科技进步和网络生活、人文社会和亲情友情等。