2016届高考英语写作分类掌握复习课件：13 概括记叙文的要点（新人教版）

　　* 主题：诚实才是上策/好人有好报 1.The author tells a story about (某人) a Chinese student with an excellent academic achievement who (做某事) couldn’t find a job in Germany (原因)because of his stealing rides at the subway, (启示)which shows honesty is the best policy. (2011广州一模)

　　晨读狂背语篇模板

　　2. (某人做了某事)The author happened to pick an umbrella on a bus and tried to find its owner. (结果)She was pleased to find the owner and also got a job offered by the owner of the umbrella. 一、概括方法

　　对于故事类记叙文，我们应首先找出故事的主角，然后找出该主角(何时何地因何原因或出于何种目的)做了何事，再弄清结果如何，以及该故事说明了一个什么道理或给人有什么启示。其中“某人做了某事”是最主要的。

　　灵活运用超级模仿

　　在写作过程中还注意以下几点：

　　⑴ 时态应与原文时态一致。

　　⑵ 一般以第三人称的形式来表述。如I要变成The writer， he/she等。

　　(3)可选用以下句式开头。 The passage/story is about... The author tells us a story about a... The passage is a story about... 注: 由于字数限制为大约30个词，我们也不一定要使用The story tells us之类的开头语。 二、超级模板(不一定都适合，仅作参考) 1. In order to ... sb. did sth./sth happened. As a result/Therefore， ...

　　2. sb. did sth. /sth happened/which shows ...due to/thanks to/because (of)... which shows ... (1)

　　Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.

　　三、超级仿写 1.概要写作

　　The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.

　　参考答案：

　　(某人做了某事) Three brothers, who worked for the same company, received different wages (原因)due to their different attitudes towards their work, (意义)which shows a right attitude is of great help to one’s life. (2) I hired a carpenter to help me repair an old farmhouse. After he just finished a tiring day on the job, a flat tire made him lose an hour of work. Worse still, his ancient truck refused to start. When I drove him home, he sat in stony silence. On arriving, he invited me in to meet his family. As we walked toward the front door, he stopped for a short time at a small tree, touching the branches with both hands.

　　When opening the door, his brown face was covered with smiles and he hugged his two small children and gave his wife a kiss.

　　After supper, he walked me to the car. When we passed the tree and my curiosity drove me to ask him, “Before we went in, why did you stop by the tree?” “Oh, that’s my trouble tree,” he replied, “I know I can’t help having troubles on the job and in my life, but those troubles don’t belong in the house with my wife and children.

　　I can hang them up on the tree every night before I come home. But it turned out that the next morning there weren’t as many troubles as I remembered the night before. Put down our worries for a moment and we will be relieved for ever.” 参考答案：

　　In order not to worry his family, (某人做了某事)he didn’t bring his trouble home, and to his surprise, he forgot the trouble the next day. (启示)Therefore,

　　we are advised to put down our worries and relieve our pressure.