2016届江苏宿迁宿豫中学高考英语专题复习精练：短文改错（2）

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　　Every year on the four Thursday of November is Thanksgiving Day. It's a festival for Americans and Canadians with the purpose of showing thanks to harvest, while Canadians celebrate it in the second Monday of October. I have a penfriend in American. He wrote to me about his last Thanksgiving Day. He told me it was a time for family reunion. Families would come back to home to celebrate the festival altogether.

　　Most of the time it was his mother whom prepared the dinner. Turkey is must for the festival. It looks

　　like a huge chicken. His mother also made pumpkin pies and other delicious food for us. After the dinner, they talk with each other about the old things or the future plan.

　　He said sometime

　　they

　　would

　　invite

　　some

　　friends to

　　share

　　the happiness of Thanksgiving Day. In a word, he had a great time on Thanksgiving Day.

　　答案：

　　Every year on the

　　Thursday of November is Thanksgiving

　　Day. It's a festival for Americans and Canadians with the purpose of

　　showing thanks

　　to harvest, while Canadians celebrate it

　　the second Monday of October. I have a penfriend in

　　. He

　　wrote to me about his last Thanksgiving Day. He told me it was a time

　　for family reunion.

　　Families would come back to home to celebrate the

　　festival . Most of the time it was his mother

　　prepared the dinner. Turkey is

　　must for the festival. It looks like

　　a huge chicken.

　　His mother also made pumpkin pies and other

　　delicious food for . After the dinner，they

　　with each other

　　about the old things or the future plan.

　　He said

　　they would

　　invite some friends to share the happiness of Thanksgiving Day. In a

　　word, he had a great time on Thanksgiving Day.

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　　What is your favorite kind of music? Do you like jazz, popular music, classical music, folk songs, blues, and so on? In high school I took one course calling music appreciation which I great enjoyed.

　　This was not only to learn how to play a specific instrument but learn how to read and listen to music as an art form.

　　We read the stories about the life of many composers and the history of the music instruments themselves. Sometimes we listen to tapes in the language laboratory or concerts. Music is sometimes called an universal language.

　　A composer whom cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride, excitement and despair, peace and mystery along his music.

　　答案：

　　What is your favorite kind of music? Do you like jazz, popular music, classical music, folk songs, blues, and so on? In high school I took one course

　　music appreciation which I

　　enjoyed.

　　This was not only to learn how to play a specific instrument but

　　learn how to read and listen to music as an art form.

　　We read the stories about the

　　of many composers and the history of the

　　instruments themselves. Sometimes we

　　to tapes in the language laboratory or concerts. Music is sometimes called

　　universal language.

　　A composer

　　cannot speak a single word of our language can make us feel joy and pride, excitement and despair, peace and mystery

　　his music.

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　　Recently the issue of students' study has brought to public attention. Students are anxious about what to improve their scores. Some work very hard. They spend all their time in study.

　　They do nothing except to study.

　　As far as I'm concerned, it is not a good way to study. Alternating work with rest was the best way to study well. Students should try their best to learn knowledges as Francis Bacon said,

　　“Knowledge is power.”

　　Therefore, students should have other recreational activities to relax themselves, because people can do things more efficient after relaxing themselves. What's more, people can obtain knowledge from many sources besides books, that is beneficial for study.

　　Thus, combining exertion and rest are the best to study.

　　答案：

　　Recently the issue of students' study has

　　brought to public attention. Students are anxious about

　　to improve their scores. Some work very hard. They spend all their time

　　study.

　　They do nothing except to study.

　　As far as I'm concerned, it is not a good way to study. Alternating work with rest

　　the best way to study well. Students should try their best to learn

　　as Francis Bacon said,

　　“Knowledge is power.”

　　， students should have other recreational activities to relax themselves, because people can do things more

　　after relaxing themselves. What's more, people can obtain knowledge from many sources besides books,

　　is beneficial for study.

　　Thus, combining exertion and rest

　　the best to study.

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　　In order to provide us students with a opportunity to exchange books but make better use of our used books,

　　our Students' Union held a campus book fair in the afternoon of June 15,2017. Like other fairs of this kind, prices are very low. As far as I'm concerned it,

　　I like this activity，that is beneficial to us

　　students.On the one hand,

　　I

　　felt my social skills had well practiced and improving.On the other hand,

　　this activity also gave us an excellently opportunity to feel a bit of the real world. I wish more events like this book fair will be held in our school.

　　答案：

　　In order to provide us students with

　　opportunity to exchange books

　　make better use of our used books,

　　our Students' Union held a campus book fair

　　the afternoon of June 15,2017. Like other fairs of this kind, prices

　　very low. As far as I'm concerned it,

　　I like this activity,

　　is

　　beneficial to us

　　students.On the one hand,

　　I

　　felt my social skills had

　　well practiced and

　　.On the other hand,

　　this activity also gave us an

　　opportunity to feel a bit of the real world. I wish more events like this book fair

　　be held in our school.

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　　I'm neither interested

　　in sports or good at it.But I can swim before I was a baby. My mother once tells me that she let me swim in the water with a life­buoy(救生圈)

　　when I was 20

　　days old. And then I should swim gradually.When I have grown up,

　　I like swimming very much that I swim all the year round. Swimming in summer makes me feel comfortably to lower my temperature while winter swimming makes me to feel excited. Whenever I feel upset, I will go swimming and then I will be full with energy and feel relaxed. Besides, you can make more

　　friends in swimming. Oh, I could wait to swim now.

　　答案：

　　I'm neither interested in sports

　　good at it.But I can swim

　　I was a baby. My mother once

　　me that she let me swim in the water with a life­buoy(救生圈) when I was 20 days old. And then I

　　swim gradually.When I have grown up, I like swimming

　　much that I swim all the year round. Swimming in summer makes me feel

　　to lower my temperature while winter swimming makes me

　　to

　　feel excited. Whenever I feel upset, I will go swimming and then I will be full

　　energy and feel relaxed. Besides,

　　can make more friends in swimming.

　　Oh, I could

　　wait to swim now.