2016届浙江临安市高考英语二轮短文改错练习（2）

　　浙江临安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错练习（2）及答案

　　短文改错(每小题I分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意:

　　1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the  street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864.

　　Two minutes ago, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.  

　　【参考答案】

　　2.76. In---on

　　77. while---when

　　78.

　　sides---side

　　79. drive---driving

　　80.made---make

　　81. she---he

　　82.young woman---a young woman

　　83. 加who/wearing

　　84.ago---later

　　85. passed---passing

　　短文改错（共10小题：每小扼l分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每旬中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、别除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个润字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词．

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult

　　students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects. on a table, and he asked

　　them to give her the ruler, the book and”on. The class went very smooth and the

　　students seemed interested in the work unless my friend tuned to an Italian student

　　and said, "Give me the keys." The Italian looked surprising end somewhat at. a loss.

　　Swing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn't heard him clearly. However, he

　　repeated, "Give me the keys." The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.

　　【参考答案】4.

　　A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧ class of foreign adult

　　giving

　　a

　　students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked

　　them to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the

　　him

　　smoothly

　　students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student

　　until

　　and said, “Give me the keys.” The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.

　　surprised

　　Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However, he

　　thought

　　Therefore

　　repeated, “Give me the keys.” The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.

　　cheeks

　　短文改错：（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great pain at that moment but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over． Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn't tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates． As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse．Now I know I am wrong．we can tell other our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return．In this way, we can get along with each other happily and peacefully．

　　【参考答案】

　　短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)

　　该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。

　　修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

　　I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.

　　【参考答案】5、

　　短文改错（共10小题：第小题1分，满分10分）

　　（注意：在试卷上作答无效）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Many year ago a poor man grew an orange tree. 　76. _______

　　On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found　77. _______

　　one of them was so big as a football . He took it 　78. _______

　　to the king . The king was so happy that he gave the 　79. _______

　　poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it ,　80. _______

　　he said for himself ,"I'll take my gold cup to the king 　81. _______

　　and he will give me much money . The next day the king receive

　　82. _______

　　from the cup . The king was very fond of the cup and he told83. _______

　　the rich man, “I have an orange . It is beautiful than the cup, 　84. _______

　　so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money”. 　85. _______

　　【参考答案】6.

　　76. year→years

　　77. Some →One　78. so→as

　　79. 正确 80. lots→lots of

　　81. for→to　

　　82. receive→received 83.from去掉84. beautiful→more beautiful

　　85. instead→instead of

　　短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

　　Dear Robert,

　　Thank for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get it. I’d be very happy to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study in Senior Three of Binhai High School. I’m a monitor of my class. I am about to take the National Matriculation Entrance Examination after twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8. You know. I want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day.

　　Best wishes！

　　Yours truly,

　　Bob

　　【参考答案】4.Dear Robert,

　　Thank（改为Thanks 或for 前加you） for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get （改为got）it. I’d be very happy to be your pen friends (改为friend) .Now allow (加to) me introduce myself to you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study （改为studying） in Senior Three of Binhai High School. I’m a （去掉a） monitor of my class. I am about （去掉about）to take the National Matriculation Entrance Examination after （改为in） twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8. You know. I want very （改为so）much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully（改为full） use of every hour and study far into the night every day.

　　Best wishes！

　　Yours truly,

　　Bob