2016届高三英语二轮随堂训练课件：专题6 书面表达 6.1

　　专题六　书面表达 第1讲　书信邮件类 【典例】(2016·浙江高考)

　　学校图书馆需要购置一批新书, 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越, 你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100-120个词的信, 推荐这两类书, 并分别说明推荐理由。 注意: 信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。 Dear Mr Wang,

　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue 【解题思路】 第一步: 依体裁谋篇章　结构对第一关 这是一篇书信类文章, 短文的四部分应为: 第一段说明写信的目的; 第 二段阐明推荐科普类图书的原因; 第三段阐明推荐文学类图书的原因;

　　第四段表达期待。 第二步: 列要点选句式　要点全及格线 要点一: 我想提一些建议。____________________________ 要点二: 我们最需要的是科普类图书。____________________________ ____________ I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. 要点三: 除了通过阅读获取知识外, 我们应该读一些文学书去获得乐 趣和灵感。 __________________________________________________________ _____________________ 要点四: 如果你能考虑我的推荐, 我不胜感激。 _____________________________________________________ In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books for fun and inspiration. I would appreciate it if you can consider my recommendation. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句　句式美优秀分 要点一拓展: 了解到我们学校将购买图书, 我想提一些建议。(用know 现在分词形式作原因状语) ____________________________________________________________ _______________ 要点二拓展: 添加推荐原因　__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions. What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries. 要点三拓展: 添加推荐原因　___________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ___________________________ In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books for fun and inspiration. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically. 【现场阅卷·作文升格】 学　生　答　卷 我　来　阅　卷 该生习作为四档作文, 得分为18分。能覆盖所有内容要点; 大部分句子基本正确, 可以适当增加复合句的使用; 衔接成分太少, 可以适当添加一些过渡词。 1. 第二句call应改为called, 非谓语动词错误, 此处student和call之间存在被动关系, 故用called。 2. 第四句advices应改为advice, 名词单复数错误, advice为不可数名词, 故不能用复数形式。 3. 第七句和第八句可以合并成一个含有定语从句的复合句: Literary books can also be bought, which have many beautiful sentences and can improve our reading skills.

　　4. 第十句中的very like our library应改为like our library very much, very不能直接修饰动词。 5. 文章句子基本上都是罗列, 可以适当加入表递进的过渡词: what is more, in addition, besides, furthermore, moreover, as well as, additionally等。 五　档　作　文 Dear Mr Wang,

　　Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.

　　What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

　　In addition to reading for knowledge, we should read literary books for fun and inspiration. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

　　I would appreciate it if you can consider my recommendation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue 一、提纲类作文的三步训练法

　　书信邮件类作文一般是以提纲类作文的形式出现, 其写作技巧有:

　　1. 收集信息, 确定文体。收集文章所提供的文字信息、图表或图片信息, 然后确定文章的主题、内容以及文体。

　　2. 列出提纲, 明确主题。列出提纲, 认清题目和提纲之间的关系, 提纲只是对文章的提示和概括, 不是主题句。需要根据提纲的性质, 写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子, 使之成为主题句。

　　3. 围绕主题, 进行扩展。材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是, 所选材料要与文章的主题相符, 即要“扣题”。同时要具有典型性, 能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中, 还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。 二、书信邮件类作文常用词汇及句型 (一)常用词汇 1. announcement n. 通知 2. popularity n. 受欢迎, 流行 3. activity n. 活动

　　4. volunteer n. 志愿者 5. course n. 课程

　　6. accommodation n. 住宿 7. vacation n. 假期

　　8. dormitory n. 宿舍 9. potential n. 潜力

　　10. behavior n. 行为 11. information n. 信息 12. charity n. 慈善 13. pressure n. 压力

　　14. preparation n. 准备 15. conference n. 会议

　　16. organize vt. 组织 17. trust vt. 信任

　　18. attend vt. 参加 19. benefit vt. 使……受益

　　20. confident adj. 有信心的 21. look forward to期待 22. give sb. a hand帮某人忙 23. take regular exercise经常参加体育锻炼 24. control the temper控制脾气 25. remain optimistic/calm保持乐观/冷静 26. be helpful to对……有帮助 27. be grateful to感激 28. be around the corner即将来临 29. make a huge success取得巨大成功 30. in addition/what’s more/besides另外 31. promote the friendship促进友谊 32. express warm welcome to sb. 对某人表达热烈欢迎 33. develop sb. ’s interest培养某人的兴趣 34. consist of由……组成 35. benefit from从……中获益 36. wish sb. a pleasant time祝某人玩得愉快 37. compared with和……相比 38. achieve a goal实现目标 39. develop a habit培养习惯 40. get along well with sb. 和某人很好地相处 41. enjoy a colorful and fruitful life享受多彩和充实的生活 42. prepare for为……做准备 43. spare no effort to do sth. 不遗余力做某事 44. raise the awareness of. . . 提高……的意识 45. make a big difference产生很大作用 46. succeed in在……成功 47. make full use of充分利用 48. in need of需要 (二)常用句型 1. 精彩开头 ①(2015·全国卷Ⅱ) I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.

　　我想邀请您一起去参观……(表达邀请) ②(2016·浙江高考)Knowing that our school library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.

　　得知我们学校图书馆要买图书, 我想……(说明原因) ③(2016·新课标全国卷Ⅰ) I have seen your advertisement and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. 我看了你们的广告, 我想更多地了解……(表达询问) ④(2016·北京高考)I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left foot is injured, I cannot go with you as planned. 我记得我们原计划……, 但是现在由于……我不能够和您如期前往。(用于陈述理由) ⑤(2016·安徽高考)I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a hard time at the moment. 得知此刻……我深感遗憾。(表达同情) 2. 正文佳句 ①(2015·全国卷Ⅱ) We’ll also spend some time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. (活动内容) 我们将一起花费一些时间……, 我希望这会让他们高兴。 ②(2016·新课标全国卷Ⅰ) I would like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.

　　我想知道……是否……(表达询问) ③(2016·新课标全国卷Ⅱ) In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. 在我业余时间, 我将继续……例如……(介绍爱好) ④(2016·安徽高考)Go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. 因为……是做……的一种有效方法。(表达建议) ⑤(2016·安徽高考)The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.

　　重要的是学会……以便于……(表达建议) ⑥(2016·山东高考)As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study. 别无选择, 只好……(表达决心) 3. 余味结尾 ①(2015·全国卷Ⅱ) If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

　　如果您能来, 请告知我们, 我们会在……等您。(邀请信结尾) ②(2015·北京高考) If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.

　　如果你对此有兴趣, 请告知我, 我将给你发送更多信息。(活动介绍结尾) ③(2016·江西高考)I am sure that with great efforts, we will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

　　我确信, 只要我们付出极大努力, 我们将会……(发言稿结尾) ④(2016·陕西高考)I hope we students will benefit from your presence. 我希望我们学生会从……中获益匪浅。(欢迎词结尾) ⑤(2016·山东高考) I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

　　盼望着您早日回信。(电子邮件/书信结尾) ⑥(2016·新课标全国卷)I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

　　我希望被接受为……中的一员。(申请信结尾) ⑦(2016·全国卷Ⅱ) I am sure you will have a good time at the party.

　　我确信你们会在……玩得高兴。(邀请信结尾)