2016高考英语二轮书面表达训练：图文作文（06）

　　训练（06）及参考范文

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。

　　你的短文应包含以下内容：

　　1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；

　　2. 结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想；

　　3. 举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

　　注意：

　　1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。

　　2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

　　第一节 基础写作

　　[写作内容]

　　请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的句子描述全部所给的信息内容。

　　假设你是一名导游，将带团到广东霞山。出发前你对美国游客们简单介绍

　　当天的行程和其他事项。

　　(1)、霞山位于广东北部，距广州280公里，乘车6小时；

　　(2)、在韶关市停留一小时，吃午饭；

　　(3)、下午5点到南雄，晚宿南雄宾馆，第二天去游玩霞山；

　　(4)、路途遥远，艰难，但沿途你会介绍美景和趣闻让游客忘记疲劳。

　　[写作要求]

　　(1)只能使用5个句子介绍以上全部内容； (2)短文的开头已为你写好。

　　Ladies and gentlemen,

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　　------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ [评分标准］句子结构的准确性和复杂度；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。

　　(基础写作参考范文one possible version)

　　Ladies and gentlemen,

　　Xia Mountains, about 280 kilometers away from Guangzhou, is located in the north of Guangdong Province. It will take us 6 hours to get there. At noon, stopping in Shaoguan City for an hour to have our lunch, we will reach another city — Nanxiong at 5 o’clock in the afternoon and for the night there, and, by the way, we will climb Xixia Mountains next morning.

　　Although the trip to Xia Mountains is a bit long and difficult, the beautiful scenery and interesting things on the way will catch you eyes and help get rid of your tiredness. Besides, from time to time, I’ll give you a brief account of Xia Mountains.

　　第二节

　　读写任务

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　One night when my wife was preparing dinner, our little son took a piece of paper to her which read:

　　For washing the car---- $5.00

　　Playing with little sister---- $0.25

　　Getting a good report card----$5.00

　　For sweeping the common corridor--- $2.00

　　Total---$12.25

　　His mother looked at him standing there expecting payment. She picked up the pen and turning the paper over, this is what she wrote：

　　For 10 months I carried you---- No charge

　　For the toys, food and clothes ---- No charge

　　The full cost of my love ---- No charge

　　When he finished reading, he had big tears in his eyes. He looked at his mother and said, “Mummy, I love you!” Then he took the pen and in great big letters wrote on the “bill”: “All paid.”

　　[写作内容]

　　1. 以约30词概括短文的内容要点。

　　2. 以约120词，以“母爱无价”为题，记一件有关母爱的感人事件，并包括：

　　(1)、描述你的感受；

　　(2)、总结你对母爱的看法。

　　[写作要求]

　　(1)、你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但是不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子； (2)、标题自定。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　(读写任务参考范文one possible version)

　　The writer tells us a story about a mother and her son in which the mother let his son realize her unconditional and priceless love and move to tears with a few words.

　　Mum, is the warmest word in everyone’s heart. I have never forgotten a story which touches me deeply in heart. A little boy had a serious disease. After a long time treatment, doctors could do nothing to save him. He was frightened and cried. But his mother comforted him and said, “My son, you will never die. You are always my boy in my heart.” The boy calmed and thrilled, at last, survived.

　　Without saying love, the mother expressed her love to her son. Nothing could express more.

　　I wrote this to thank all the mothers out there, and especially to thank my mum who makes me food late at night when I am too tired to do so or unable to do, sits by my bed in my time of greatest need and never says no to her daughter. If your mother is still around, never forget to love her more than ever. And remember her unconditional love and pass it on. Always remember to love your mother because you only have one in your life time.