Finally, the third essay. The overall structure of the story is quite well controlled, though the logical links between individual events could be improved. For example, the employee showed her to the manager, so she was going towards him, but then the manager approached from behind. Finally, she looked up and saw a frown, which again suggests that she was facing him. But these are errors that can be corrected with careful thought. What really made this essay different from all the others was a single phrase that leapt off the page at me? mosquitos voice. This phrase,unexpected and metaphorical, shows precise observation of life. It clearly expresses a complex set of features in the way the writer spoke. Think of the nights when you hear the high-pitched whine of a mosquito in the dark. You dont know where it is and you flap your hands madly trying to hit it, but usually without success. Now think about the writer: Her voice was high-pitched, from nervousness probably, and she probably had the feeling that it came from somewhere else and was not under her control? just like the mosquito. A striking and very effective image that lifted this essay out of the crowd for me.
真人脱毛、吃零食……盘点电影中那些不按剧本出牌的“神操作”
国际英语资讯:Greek borders are not reopening, officials say
清明节小长假旅行计划:12星座大不同
体坛英语资讯:British cyclist Yates wins third stage of Volta de Catalonya
国内英语资讯:Xi, Trump hold telephone conversation
世界自闭症关注日:一起来关注“来自星星的孩子”
国际英语资讯:Switzerland signs agreement to represent U.S. interests in Venezuela
The Influence of US TV Series 美剧带来的影响
国际英语资讯:S. Koreas military says UN Command positive about DMZ peace trails
体坛英语资讯:Tabarez: Uruguay Copa America squad almost decided
全球首款治疗产后抑郁的新药问世了
国内英语资讯:China tops in foreign visitor number of German Hanover Messe
Teachers Love 教师的爱
To Spend the “Golden Week” On The Road 在路上度过黄金周
国内英语资讯:Xis tour injects new impetus into China-Central Asia cooperation: experts
国际英语资讯:Philippines tightens security after blast in southern town
体坛英语资讯:38 test events to be held ahead of Military World Games
谷歌的人工智能DeepMind可以给人看病了
埃菲尔铁塔130岁了! 关于它的这10件事你却不一定知道
国内英语资讯:Tariff suspensions create good atmosphere for China, US trade talks: MOC
国际英语资讯:Probe result shows crashed Ethiopian plane pilots followed required Boeing procedures
国内英语资讯:Japan to send larger delegation to China to hold economic talks
国内英语资讯:Xi meets with delegates to PLA Air Force Party Congress
国内英语资讯:Namibian president meets CPC delegation
娱乐英语资讯:The Temptations show in Namibia postponed
国际英语资讯:Japan lodges protest with Russia over military drills near disputed island
国际英语资讯:More Brexit talks between political foes as rage, anger continues at Westminster
国内英语资讯:Commentary: China, U.S. trade talks enter crucial stage, require more efforts
国际英语资讯:Lao president hails China-Laos Railway construction
体坛英语资讯:Aussie football legend Tim Cahill officially retires
不限 |
英语教案 |
英语课件 |
英语试题 |
不限 |
不限 |
上册 |
下册 |
不限 |