11月10日雅思写作的范文及语料库解析

　　三段：国家培养专业运动的弊端 + 普及民众体育设施的利好：

　　Granted, there is no garden without weeds. Excessive investment in training professional sportsmen might make the money fly, after all, we have more pressing social problems that need support from the public purse such as popularizing free education or ameliorating medical care. An argument might be hold by some people is that to provide common people with more sports facilities could create more possibilities of enhancing the heath index amongst the general public. By contrast, professional sports facilities could only serve small group of people.

　　翻译：的确，没有不长杂草的花园，，在培养运动员方面过度投资等于浪费金钱。毕竟，我们有更加紧迫的民生问题需要来自国库的财政支持例如教育和医疗。同时，很多人也会认为，普及推广民众体育设施可以为更多普通人的健身提供良好的契机，相反，运动员使用的专业体育设施只有少数人才能使用。

　　新东方薛鹏原创语料库总结：

　　1. might make the money fly v 等于浪费金钱

　　2. financial support from the public purse 来自国家的财政支持

　　3. popularize free education v普及免费教育

　　4. ameliorate medical care v 改善医疗

　　5. create more possibilities of doing sth v 创造更多的 的可能性;

　　6. enhance the heath index amongst the general public. v 提高民众的健康指数

　　尾段：再次亮明观点 + 总结理由：

　　My stand is that to train a large proportion of athletes enjoys many visible virtues such as educating the pubic, kindling peoples zeal of doing physical exercises and enhancing a nations international influence.

　　翻译：我的立场是培养专业运动员利好很多，例如对于公众的教育意义，点燃民众建设热情，提高国家的国际地位。

　　原创语料库点评：

　　1. a large proportion of 大量的

　　2. kindling peoples zeal of 点燃热情

　　全文点评：文无定法，小鹏哥范文只是范文写作之一种。该文自由写作;淡化模板;主题明确;论证饱满，词汇变化;句型多样;用到许多的雅思阅读以及考官常用的词汇;词汇句法来着我多年的词汇教学和阅读教学积累。