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　　I am writing this letter to recommend myself as an editor of your magazine Economist which advertised in the newspaper two months ago(时间太长，两个月之前的广告很有可能已经过期). I do wish to have the opportunity of having worked(这里不用完成时，改成working) with you and your colleagues.

　　As a young man whose majority(这个词是大多数的意思，改成major) is in(去掉) News, I find my personally ability is well fit this job. After my graduate from Beijing University I worked for a finance company,(加连词and) during the two years I acquired much knowledge of economy. With the capability of writing I think I could be the right person of the position needed by you.

　　I really wish to have an interview form(from) you. You could call me in your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your.