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　　Your advertisement for a staff member in May 10,China daily interested me，because the position your provide(应该用过去时，因为广告已经刊登) there exactly like the kind of job I am seeking for.

　　Accoring(拼写错误providing)to your advertisement，you need a staff who is highly educated and has some related woking(拼写错误) experience. I think I meet the requirements above. I graduated form(拼写错误) ShangHai(h不用大写) University with a(m的发音是以元音开头，所以要用an) M.S.degree(最好不要用缩写). And I had worked in a relevent(拼写错误，relevant)company before. (这里可以再补充以下你有经验)Whats more, I had passed , and I can communicate with the native speaker(建议用复数) freely in English. I am a very friendly person who can quickly built friendship with others of all ages.