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　　考研英语待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Im positive about I am qualified for this position.For one thing,my majoy is Art and Calligraphy,and twice awarded scholarship in university.For another,I had some experience,designed some compositions for local advert firms,which was related to this position.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　I am a senior from the Department of Art and Calligraphy of Shanxi Normal University. I am writing to the letter for the purpose of applying for the position of designer, which your company advertised in(用介词on) the Internet. Im positive about(用that，后面接的是句子) I am qualified for this position. For one thing, my majoy(拼写错误) is Art and Calligraphy, and(加主语I，前边一句话的主语是my major) twice awarded scholarship in university. For another, I had(用现在时have) some experience, (加and I)designed some compositions for local advert firms, which was related to this position. Please refer to my attached resume which further(用第三人称单数) my information. I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评：6分错误有点多，另外需要多看些模板和满分作文来提升表达能力和思路。