your sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the possible of a placement on the a(两个冠词不要同时用)sofeware(拼写错误,software) engineer of your corporation. The news that I heard from my friend last week.(这不是一句完整的话,要并入前一句话中) I have been finish(改成finished,用过去分词,不用被动语态) study computer software development at hubei university(学校名称属特有名次,首字母大写) and pursued it two years. At one time i(大写)used to worked as a group leader in a local campany(拼写错误,company), salary is well but frequently overtime, i(大写)feel very tied, so i(大写) have decide to quit this job. therefore(t大写), I am available for an interview any time. Thank you for your considerderation(拼写错误,consideration) of this application. I look forward to hearing from you. your(Yours)sincerely, Li Ming 点评:4-5分细节性错误和小错误比较多。第二段内容不太符合要求,要分几条写你哪里适合这项工作。注意大小写的问题。
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