考研英语作文训练及范文(二十四)

　　You have got a ticket to a computer fair, but you now find that you are unable to go. Write a note to your friend, George,

　　1) introducing the fair briefly;

　　2) explaining why you are sending the enclosed ticket to him;

　　3) and telling him briefly how to get there.

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Li Ming instead. You do not need to write the address.

　　范文

　　Dear George,

　　Ive got a ticket for a computer fair, but now I find Im unable to go because of some unexpected businesses. Ive learned there are a lot of updated anti-virus programs and newly-developed models on show, and a cyber-head like you would not miss the opportunity for anything. I cant go because Im going to meet with an important client, so I send the enclosed ticket to you. It is very convenient for you to get there this Friday afternoon. You may go by taxi or take the No 12 bus, and you cant miss it. Please let me know when you have received the ticket. Hope you will have a nice time.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Ming

　　译文

　　我有一张计算机展销会的入场券，但是突然有事去不了。展销会上有许多升级计算机放毒软件和新开发的机型。任何电脑迷都不会错过这个机会的。我要去见一个重要的客户，现在把入场券给你随信寄来。你周五下午去那里很方便，打车或乘坐12路公共汽车就可以了。收到信后告之我。祝你愉快。

　　思路启迪

　　段落中的各个句子必须围绕一个主题(一个内容)展开;短文中的各个层次则围绕短文的主题，从不同侧面深入阐述。

　　保证句子的统一性和连贯性是组词的基本要求。句子的统一性和连贯性是相辅相成的，最简单的解释是，意思完整，主次分明，前后连贯。从语义上看，句子各部分应该是紧密联系在一起，表达一个完整的意思;从语法角度来看，正确的句子应该是结构严谨，关系一致，语序正确;从修辞角度来年，好的句子应该是中心突出，逻辑性强，准确简练。如果一个句子表达的意思不完整，主次关系不明确，逻辑关系混乱，那么这个句子的统一性和连贯性就遭到了破坏，句子就有语病，读者也就无法了解作者的本意。

　　所谓一致性就是说，一段文章必须讨论一个中心思想，服务于一个目的。根据一致性的原则，文章中所有的细节都要与主题句直接有关，要有利于说明中心思想。任何与主题无关，或者说服力不强的内容，都必须舍弃，否则会使读者迷惑不解，而有损于作者意图的表达。

　　应用文写作同样必须注意文章的一致性的原则。在展开时必须牢牢把握好提示的要点，才能达到写作的要求。