考研英语作文批改范例12

　　To whom it may concern, 　　I want to take part in Project Hope with financial help to a child who has suffered in the earthquake which happened recently.（原句过于啰嗦，建议改为I want to help a child who has suffered in the earthquake happened recently.）Im writing this letter to seek your help to select a candidate. 　　Firstly, this child should live in a remote town, and he has lost both of his parents or his parents are incapable to to （删除）work. Secondly, the child is now between Grade one to Grade Six. Last but not the least, theres no donation to him already（he hasnt received any donation till now）. 　　If you find the right person for me, please contact me at liming@sina.com.cn. Thank your for your kindly help and look forward to your reply. 　　Yours sincerely,