考研英语小作文批改感谢信0-4分例文3

　　考研英语待批改作文：

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　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs, playing simple English games, and so on, I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who give me many opportunities to speak English loudly, beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst in English both listening and writing.

　　Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英语作文批改点评如下：

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the help you give(改为gave) me about learning English. If it had not been for your assistance in (in 后面要加doing sth.)a variety of activities including holding funny discussions with me, teaching me singing English songs,(加and) playing simple English games, and so on(删除), I fear that I would have been searching a wrong and difficult way to learn English and feeling unhappy to learn it.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who give(改为gave) me many opportunities to speak English loudly, (改为.because 首字母大写)beacuse you know that I am so shy to talk with others by English. Your help raise my level of proficiency in English, and now I enjoy greatest interst(拼写错误interest) in English both listening and writing.

　　Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

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　　同学你好，标点符号与后面的单词之间空一格。叹号后面的第一个单词首字母也要大写。单词拼写的错误尽量避免。建议你好好学习一下有关虚拟语气的知识点，多读一些英语文章，可有效杜绝中式英语。