考研英语待批改作文:
5-7分
第二篇
Dear Mr.Li,
I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.
The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Mr.Li,
I am truly sorry that I cannot go to your birthday party this Sunday as a result of an unexpected examination.
The reason is that my teacher suddenly informs me to take an examination next Monday and I have not recited the textbooks well. Moreover, this examination is very likely to decide whether could I(改为I could) study abroad or not. Therefore, I could not go to your birthday party this Sunday. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好,你的作文思路不错,宾语从句是正常语序。
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