2015考研已经进入最后阶段,在剩下不到60天的时间里,我们的写作复习开始显得尤为重要。而我们在集训营和各地分校的教学实践中发现,学生在初期写作练习时常常为字数不够而犯愁。而还有一部分同学用了一些不恰当的方式来填充字数,结果效果却显得适得其反。彭飞老师认为,写作文确实有时候是有所谓凑字数的必要,但是也需要有章法,有技巧。
下面我们先看一篇字数不够的例文,这是一篇申请信,讲述的是一个学生要申请到别的学校深造。
Dear Siror Madam,
I am writing to apply for further education in your college.My major is English,and Ig raduated from Beijing University.
First of all,I have a good academic performance in school.Moreover,Iam open-minded and intelligent.In addition,I have a good command of English.
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information.Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Ming
本文总体来说无论语言表达能力还是词汇和语法的驾驭都可谓是上乘佳作,但是大家可以看得很清楚的是,文章的字数明显不够。除开标点、称呼和落款,字数总计才仅仅63个单词,距离我们最起码规定的80词还缺17个单词。那么我们可以拿三个自然段分别来开刀。
一.在首段中,大家已经习惯了I am writing xxx这个形式,其实我们可以在am和writing中间添上一个now,这样文章会显得更加活泼,而且单词也多了一个。毕竟在文章中加上一些可有可无的状语绝对是我们凑字数的一把利器。
二.依然在首段,college前面是可以加上定语的,比如prestigious,那么prestigious college可以翻译为贵校。
三.重点的攻势应该放在第二自然段。我们可以使用举例法来使该段变得更加丰满。尤其是第一条,文章仅仅只说了在校成绩很好,那么如果加上一个例子是不是就可以更加清楚地体现出这一点并且让字数立马接近题目要求呢,紧接着后面可以加上一句:A good case in point is that I win scholarships almost every semester.然后如法炮制,我们可以讲第二段末句的后面加上especially speaking and translating.
如此一来,整个文章的字数也够了,并且能够具备更佳的可读性了。
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