结尾部分的主要功能在于呼应主题,使得文章有完整性。至于结尾的方法,多数写作教材都有说明,这里不再多说。但有一点还要提醒大家,结尾中该说清楚的地方还是要说清楚的。比如willingking的结尾没有提出每种办法的回报会体现在什么地方,因而结尾在细节方面不太成功。 As is shown in the picture above, a hand is tightly glued to a computer mouse linked to a personal computer by an iron chain. Clearly, the iron chain stands for the control of the computer over the person who indulges himself in the cyberspace. An implication from the picture can be figured out that the personal computer, a high-tech device originally created for saving time and energy so as to benefit humankind, ironically turns out to be a gadget murdering the time and energy of quite some people. The personal computer worthlessly consumes the time of those addicted to it. A survey shows the average time spent on it of those addicted amounts to 16 hours a day. And the minimum continuous time spent on the personal computer is 12 hours, while the maximum soars surprisingly to 168 hour-a whole week! Needlessly to say, the computer has eaten up their time for work, for sports and, worse still, their precious time for rest-an natural activity for refreshment to keep the body functioning normally. The personal computer has also depleted their vigor. They survey finds almost all those computer freaks feel sluggish in their jobs as a result of staying too long before the computer. They also have lost their enthusiasms for outdoor activities. Some even become so feeble that they sweat when standing for a short while. It seems that they are being burned out by the high-tech monster. The sole way for the addicts to restore the proper use of the computer relies on themselves. Only when they have a sound recognition that the computer is but a tool to facilitate their life instead of their master can they develop their self-control. If they can limit their time on using the computer within 6 hours a day, their life will be freed from the trap of the computer and will return to its track. 当然,这篇文章这样写还是有小儿科之嫌。只不过是将一篇短文写得有点像而已。如果真要写有关这一话题的文章,肯定是不会这样写的。比如,可以去探讨人们耽溺于电脑空间的心理原因。然而如果那样来写,恐怕会写得很复杂,不是一篇入门短文的能容纳的。
七年级上学期英语寒假作业参考答案
我国将实行“生育登记服务制度” 生育两孩无需“准生证”
2016年初一年级英语上学期寒假作业答案
外研版英语七年级寒假作业题及答案解析
2016年初中三年级英语寒假作业参考答案
小学一年级上册英语寒假作业设计
2016年九年级英语上册寒假作业答案参考
2016年初一年级英语上册寒假作业答案参考
成为人见人爱的福尔摩斯 ?get这10个冷艳技能吧
2016年七年级快乐寒假英语寒假作业答案
英学校禁止学生携名牌手包入校园
“冰山推文”是什么鬼?
美国大选初期辩论是“欢乐时光”?
充满希望,乐观积极的“一月心情”
2016年小学英语一年级上册寒假作业
微软将停止对IE 8/9/10的技术支持
外研版2016年七年级英语寒假作业答案
没有声音的闹钟:让香味唤醒你
九年级英语上册寒假作业答案参考
初三英语寒假作业参考答案
小学一年级英语寒假作业
小学一年级寒假英语口语作业
世界各国对朝鲜氢弹试验的反应
盘点外媒创造的中国特色词汇
央行1300亿“逆回购”对冲流动性隐忧
中国成第一大“电子竞技”市场
2016年小学一年级英语上册寒假练习题
2016年七年级英语寒假作业答案(外研版)
初一英语上册寒假作业答案汇总
研究:常有父亲陪伴的孩子智商更高
| 不限 |
| 英语教案 |
| 英语课件 |
| 英语试题 |
| 不限 |
| 不限 |
| 上册 |
| 下册 |
| 不限 |