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考研英语的作文范文名师批改（十一）

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　　考研英语作文热门话题范文：老外过春节

　　The black man, with a happy and delighted face, is spending spring festival with a Chinese family. Conspicuously, it is a encouraging scene relate to culture integration between China and west, which is a excellent offspring of new century.Several factor weight heavily for this emerging trend illustrate in the picture, yet, two kernels suspended on the top of the list which should never be overlooked. To begin with, the Chinese economy has witnessed its unprecedented lever of growth in past 30 years, which give an powerful impetus to the publicity of Chinese civilization. Whats more, Chinese culture, though through perpetual wars and turbulence, preserve its vitality and glamour, assets appreciated by most foreigners. There are encouraging parallels today, as many westerners in one wave after another making their trip to China to get panorama of Chinese heritage.From my perspective, various measures should be made to foster this integration. Firstly, suitable atmosphere must be created, where our culture and its counterparts can co-exist in harmonious.,by us. Secondly, the authorities ought to lunch various publicity campaigns to make Chinese culture known to world. The cultural thrive has loomed, and the economic prosperity will not be far away.

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