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From the picture above we can see that there are three trees in the picture, and one of them is growing very strongly. However, the other two trees look like very small. If you take a careful notice, youll find that a tree has become bend because of the big tree hostile his development. The drawer of the image aims at revealing a common phenomenon in our country, children today are generally spoiled. There are two major reasons for the problem. On one hand, as the reform of population policy, most families are allowedonly one child who is usually regarded as the apple of parents eye. Therefore, parents are always try their best to provide their child with everything they want. On the other hand, lacking the awareness of bearing hardships is also an important reason that can not be ignored.I think it is imperative that we should take some effective measures. To begin with, our government can modify the policy that allows families to raise more than one students. In addition, the most measure of all is that we should cultivate the sense of dependent. Only in this way, can we meliorate the problem in the near future.
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