英语六级写作真题点评

　　【题目】 　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 　　1. 有人说名字或名称很重要 也有人觉得名字或名称无关紧要 我认为 　　On the Importance of a Name 　　【点评】 　　看到题目，根本没有办法从点评的角度去分析。因为这次题目的特点 　　一、 简单（标准的议论文，而且不需要自行整理结构的那种） 　　二、 传统（没有任何标新立意，甚至有一种想法认为，这个题目出的事不是没有办法的办法，当然是玩笑） 　　三、 标准（符合六级作文的重点考察文体） 　　对于这次的作文，要完成一篇高质量的文章其实根本就不难。根据作文写作要求文章的结构可以清晰地阐述 　　第一段：关于名字这个现象的引入+提出欲论证的语言； 　　第二段：结合题目要求，进行两项观点的论证（注意稍微有些原因阐述，不宜过多，否则字数上不好掌握） 　　第三段：承接上文，提出自己的观点并论证（同样注意理由的阐述要控制，否则同样会被认为写文章没有控制力） 　　下面，就给出我自己写的一篇范文。大家千万注意，没有所谓真正的范文。任何人写出来的文章其实都可以得满分。我的这篇文章其实某种意义上来说，就是为了印证课堂上反复强调的关于写作能力的展示。 　　On the importance of a name 　　A name is the representation of a persons identification and, to some extent, can demonstrate his character. In current days, however, whether a name plays a significant role has been in hot discussion. 　　Some argue that it exerts a subtle but indispensable influence on our lives. To start with, no matter where they go and what they do, they more often than not fail to live without identification. Besides, a name perhaps can assist them to be recognized remembered by others relatively with ease. While the rest hold the other side of the picture that a name fundamentally has no effect on their lives, for they state they are still able to make friends or cooperate with others without a name, a simply name. 　　As far as I am concerned, so crucial is the name a man possesses that everyone can not desert it. First, it is the name that stands for the symbol of our individuals. Furthermore, common as the name perhaps is, it really assists us to live, work, communicate and cooperate with others. It is extremely hard for us to imagine we even live without knowing the names of the people we were, are and will be with. Only when we remember, or know at least, the names of the people can we establish reasonable and pleasant relations with them, which will surely do more good than harm to our present world. 　　写有不对之处，还请同学们多多指教！