英语六级作文点睛题（7）

　　到现在一篇没练的同学，至少练一下前四道。练过的同学，可以选择自己没练过的题型练练。各种题型都练过的同学，可以侧重看看这些模拟题范文里的论据和关键的话题词，也可以用默写或对译的方式来检查自己的语言质量。想要瞒天过海、侥幸过关的同学可以只背前四篇里面划线的部分。

　　你要说押题押中的可能性有多大，我即使告诉你有百分之九十九也没用，因为你很可能死在那剩余的百分之一上，那百分之一可能是像四级曾经考过的事故见证书，导游词，招新启示，有个锤子模板可用？

　　所以，在背诵一些模板句垫底的基础上，更应该动手练几篇，找找写作的手感，夯实一批自己喜欢用的好词好句，暴露自己的常见词汇和语法问题，然后通过查字典和对照范文来改正。

　　写作模拟题

　　（七）读后感型

　　Directions: Read the story in Chinese below, and then write a composition of no less than 150 words under the titile of The Goal of Life. Your composition should be based on the story and the following outline.

　　1) What have you learned from the story?

　　2) What is the goal of your life? If you have achieved the goal of your life, what would you do?

　　目 标

　　在英国有一位残疾青年，他双腿走起路来很困难，却凭着坚强的信念和毅力创造了一次又一次的壮举：他19岁时登上了世界最高峰珠穆朗玛峰；21岁时登上了阿尔卑斯山；22岁时登上了乞力马扎罗山，28岁前他登上了世界上所有著名的高山。然而，就在28岁这一年他自杀了。原来在他11岁时，他父母在攀登乞力马扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩双双遇难。他的父母临行前给他留下了遗嘱，希望他能象父母一样，登上世界上所有著名的高山。这位残疾青年把父母的遗嘱作为他人生奋斗的目标，当实现全部目标的时候，他感到前所未有的无奈和绝望。他留下遗言：如今，功成名就的我感到无事可做了，我没有了新的目标

　　参考范文

　　（七）读后感型

　　The Goal of Life

　　A story goes thata disabled young man managed to reach the peak of every famous high mountain in the world before he was 28. He did all this just as his parents told him to do in their will. But the young man committed suicide in the end and his last words were: now I have nothing to do with all my goals achieved and my fame well established. I have no new goals.

　　Simple as the drawing is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching. Evidently, it is meant to reveal the fact that, first, one should have a grand ideal and associate it with the needs of society, and secondly, one should have his own pursuits and should not follow others blindly.

　　The story is especially instructive when we think of similar happenings around us.Some people, after making a fortune, feel empty and desperate, resorting to drugs or other low style of life. Still more young people do the same because they are in lack of lofty ideals and are only drifting with the tide.

　　As far as I am concerned,I would like to devote myself to any cause that is beneficial to mankind. My short-term goal is to learn about environmental protection and find a job in this field. And I believe this is a meaningful and useful career. It is worth my life-long efforts. I will keep finding and attaining new goals in this field.