六级写作高分常见错误（5）

　　In the past the price of meat was so high that most families could not afford it.

　　2) Crowded traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　Heavy traffic in some large cities is a big problem for city dwellers.

　　十一、破句

　　1) Nowadays, if you want to find a job. Then you must pass the job interview.

　　Nowadays, if you want to find a job, you must pass the job interview.

　　2) First you should show good manners. Because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　First you should show good manners, because the first impression you leave on others is important.

　　1. 最常见错误：从句连接词缺失，最主要的是THERE BE句型：

　　There is a saying goes ... [应为There is a saying which goes ...]

　　There are many people think that... [应为There are many people who think that...或者直接说Many people think that...]

　　Its the major thing affects peoples friendship. [少了一个that]

　　When we have difficulty, someone helps you right away is the real friend. [少了一个who]

　　2. NO MATTER / WHETHER错误，这是英语专业学生最容易犯的另一类错误：

　　Friendship is important for no matter rich people or poor people. [宜改为Friendship is possible, whether for rich people or for poor people. no matter后面必须接一个小句(主语、谓语完整)]

　　3. C语类重复。所谓C语类是个句法用语，用于引导一个完整的小句，起标志作用，如that/whether等等：

　　People are not sure that whether... [that一词多余]