吉林：英语六级考试作文解析

　　【试题】

　　Directions:

　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled On maintaining trust following the outline below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　On maintaining trust 论信任

　　这道题可以归为课上学过的问题解决型题目，下面是六级强化班问题解决型专用模板：

　　(1) 提出问题或困境

　　In the process of social advancement, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. Recently the issue of 主题has aroused a lively debate.

　　(2) 分析问题或困境的原因

　　Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon:

　　First and foremost,

　　Furthermore,

　　Eventually,

　　(3) 提出问题解决方案

　　To sum up,

　　It is high time for us to

　　Therefore,

　　第一段：目的是引出作文的主题，常用方法为背景引出法，但引出背景的句子在考试现场很难及时写出，即使写出也难以保证语法正确，这样话就可以使用一些有特色的背景句来迅速解决战斗。(注意不要随便用一些网上抄来的恶俗的句子如：With the development of technology and society, more and more people believe XXX is very, very important. Some people believe that XXX, other people believe that XXX, and I believe that XXX)。

　　In the process of social advancement, we often find ourselves in a dilemma. Recently the issue of the gradual loss of trust has aroused a lively debate.

　　第二段：阐述问题或困境的原因(2-3点),除了一些模板句，还要注意运用课上学习的高级句型和词汇。

　　Quite a few reasons can account for this phenomenon: First and foremost, (and引导的并列句)a great number of people view trust as a high-priced option and(宾语从句+where引导的定语从句) they hold that in a society where deception, fraud and dishonest behavior abound, trusting others may only get hurt in return. Furthermore, this phenomenon can also be attributed to the absence of full communication among people. (with复合结构)With the pace of modern life quickening, individuals can barely have time to communicate with each other (副词的平行并列结构)deeply and effectively.

　　第三段：主要目的是提出问题的解决方案，结构是先总结解决问题的重要性，然后再提出解决方案(1-2点)

　　To sum up, Mutual trust is conducive to the harmony of society. With trust among each other, folks are more likely to have a better understanding and communication, and thus reduce unnecessary conflicts and frictions.(形式主语)It is high time for us to pour close attention into the moral issue. Therefore, we should trust people as much as possible and try our utmost to influence those who do not trust people easily,(Doing做伴随状语)informing them of the significance of it.(倒装句) Only in this way can live in a more harmonious world.

　　综上所述，本次的作文题目难度适中，关键在于段落结构的设置，高分句型和词汇的运用以及低级语法错误的规避，只要做到以上几点，取得高分并非难事。