Nowadays, (1)different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward. They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness. (2①)Also, rewards can stimulate peoples enthusiasm to to good deeds.
(3)However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble.(5)Only if you help othres unselfishly, you can get others help when you nedd it. (2②)Besides, they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, (6)they think, (7)which is the best return.
(8)Weighing up these tow arguments, I prefer the second one. (2③)First, being happy to help others is one of Chinese peoples traditional virtues.(2④) Second, this virtue(9) is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society. (2⑤)To conclude, (10①)it is every citizens responsibility(10②)to do good deeds without expecting any reward. 点评
(1)用于引出对某事物的不同观点。
(2)衔接词语使文章条例清晰、意思连贯。
(3)转折出另一种观点。
(4)意为不期望任何火爆,介词短语充当状语,注意此处without的用法。
(5)意为只要,引导条件状语从句。
(6)插入语。
(7)which引导非限制性定于从句。
(8)用于引出个人观点,weigh up意为权衡。
(9)be of +n.相当于be+adj.。
(10)固定句式:It is...for sb.+to do sth.其中it是形式主语,不定式短语是实际的主语。
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