2011年12月GMAT考试作文AA内容回忆

　　1. V1 by NBibi 一个是那个说开了运动会就会增加经济，然后再开一个就可以增加经济了

　　V2 by tcz2515一个国家三年前举办了一个major soccer event，然后旅游业迅速增长了。有个学者跳出来说为了再次刺激旅游业，我们还要办sport event。OG上应该有的

　　考古：

　　V1. B岛国5年前举办了一场足球赛，随后旅游的人数增加，现在某人建议要再办一个国际体育盛会，预计能带来游客数量上升和经济增长。

　　V2.一个岛国B 5年前开了一个足球比赛，最近三年内游客人数涨了25%。所以说为了促进更多的游客来，我们B应该举行更多的比赛。才能带了更多的游客数量和利润。

　　原题：The country of Bonaria held a major soccer event five years ago. Therefore， if the country continues to hold major sport events， tourism will increase rapidly in the country and thus bring benefits to the countrys economy.

　　某个国家5年前办了场运动会，然后发现近三年旅游人数增多鸟，经济都增长了。所以有人提出为了促进经济增长，要再办个国际赛事。

　　［v3］一个B城市：5年前hold an succor competition. 发现相比在这个competition 3年前，在这个competition举办后的3年的number of tourists increased 25%。所有呢，这个B城市打算再举办一次类似的sport event 来吸引游客。这个城市B相信，这个sport event会增加游客人数，同时benefit the country economy.

　　［v4］ AA:5年前办了一个足球比赛，后来旅游发展很好，所以我们应该引进更多的国际体育赛事到B市，就可以吸引游客，带动经济发展

　　［v5］ B国家五年前hosted a international soccer competition 游客增加 所以市长未来想要再办类似的比赛以增加观光收入和国家收益

　　提供观点：

　　1、错误的由时间先后推出因果关系

　　2、过去的成功不能保证将来，存在他因

　　2.V1 by kenny2524289:drill bit production costs..the authors argument is trying to advise reducing total production costs..the only way is to reduce indivisual production costs and to attain big profit..because Chinlivilles（a factory of the company） production is 10 per dollar，the most production rate of the other factories of the company is 7 per dollar.。（是不是per dollar就记不清了）。。.

　　考古：

　　V1 The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting：

　　原题： The following appeared in a presentation by the chief production manager of a machine parts manufacturing company at a management meeting：

　　Our factory in Cookville is our most advanced and efficient. It is capable of producing ten drill bits for each dollar of production costs， whereas none of our other factories can produce more than seven drill bits per dollar of production costs. Therefore， we can reduce our overall drill bit production costs by devoting the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production. Since reducing the production costs of individual machine parts is the only way to achieve our larger goal of reducing our overall production costs， dedicating the Cookville factory entirely to drill bit production and shifting all other machine part production to our other factories will help us to attain that larger goal.

　　V2一个经理在一次会议说，他们公司的一家厂的drill bits一美元的成本能生产10个他们公司的其他的厂只能生产7个。所以为了减少成本，他们应该将所有的drill bits 的生产放到 那家厂，从而实现longterm goal。

　　提供思路：

　　这个argument 的思路绕来绕去就是有three mojor flaws： reduce costs by devoting entirely drill bit production to C; the only way to reduce costs is to reduce production costs; shifting the production of the other parts to other factories is the appropriate way to go

　　针对这三个direct or indirect conlusions 写就行了

　　1： although C produce more bits per dollar， the reason may be that C has high- skilled workers， total new and high- quality machines， or less amounts of orders（订单） thus entirely shifting is fallacious， the results may be that the workers may be too tired and have too much burden， the machines would be worn out， and all this could contribute to the lowering of the productivity

　　2： the management assumes without further more evidence that reucing the productions costs is the only way to enhance cost -effective production process： 可以train workers ， 引进new technologies， 定期维修老旧设备，提高management strategy.。。

　　3： 就是转移制造这一部分：也许转移制造之后 cargo and transporting fees would roar因为sporadically 分布的 工厂可以及时供货，集中在一个地方不利于 供货， 而且shifting牵扯到搬家的费用：那些cumbersomemachine怎么转移啊，人员怎么迁移啊。。。这些都是huge expense， may not weighover the elevation of the productivit