为了方便广大考生更好的复习,综合整理了GMAT作文范文精选系列文章,以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。
GMAT作文范文40:Issue
The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper. Commuter use of the new subway train is exceeding the transit companys projections. However, commuter use of the shuttle buses that transport people to the subway stations is below the projected volume. If the transit company expects commuters to ride the shuttle buses to the subway rather than drive there, it must either reduce the shuttle bus fares or increase the price of parking at the subway stations. Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
The author concludes that the local transit company must either reduce fares for the shuttle buses that transport people to their subway stations or increase parking fees at the stations. The reasons offered to support this conclusion are that commuter use of the subway train is exceeding the transit companys expectations, while commuter use of the shuffle buses is below projected volume. This argument is unconvincing because the author oversimplifies the problem and its solutions in a number of ways.
To begin with, by concluding that the transit company must either reduce shuttle fares or increase parking fees, the author assumes that these are the only available solutions to the problem of limited shuttle use. However, it is possible that other factorssuch as inconvenient shuttle routing and/or scheduling, safety concerns, or an increase in carpoolscontribute to the problem. If so, adjusting fares or parking fees would might not solve the problem.
In addition, the author assumes that reducing shuttle fees and increasing parking fees are mutually exclusive alternatives. However, the author provides no reason for imposing an either/or choice. Adjusting both shuttle fares and parking fees might produce better results. Moreover, if the author is wrong in the assumption that parking fees and shuttle fees are the only possible causes of the problem, then the most effective solution might include a complex of policy changesfor example, in shuttle fares, parking fees, rerouting, and rescheduling.
In conclusion, this argument is weak because the author oversimplifies both the problem and its possible solutions. To strengthen the argument the author must examine all factors that might account for the shuttles unpopularity. Additionally, the author should consider all possible solutions to determine which combination would bring about the greatest increase in shuttle use.
小编提醒:考生们在日常生活中需要多读范文,多练笔,培养出好的语感和逻辑,这样才能在考试中写出优秀的作文。
2010年山东济南市高三英语一模试卷及答案
2011年重庆市中考英语真题试卷及答案
2011年广西省桂林市中考英语试卷及答案
高一下学期期末考试英语试题
2011年甘肃省兰州市中考英语试卷及答案
2011年江苏省徐州市中考真题英语试题
2011年湖北省孝感市中考英语试题及答案
2011年贵州毕节地区中考英语试题
高中英语选修7 unit4 Sharing课件
2011年天津市中考英语试题及答案
2011年内蒙古包头市中考英语试题与答案
高中英语语法 动词的时态和语态课件
初中英语 初一英语教案 Unit 7 How much are these pants?
高中第一学期高一英语考试卷
2011年江苏省连云港市中考英语试卷及答案
初中英语 初一英语教案 Unit 5 Do you have a soccer ball?
2011年辽宁省大连中考英语试卷
高中英语第五册Unit 3课件2
2011年黑龙江省哈尔滨市中考英语试题及答案
初中英语 初一英语教案Unit6 Do you like bananas?
高中英语高一下学期期末测试卷
高二英语“每周一练”系列试题(30)
高二英语单项填空课件8
2011届高三英语上册单元测试试题1
初中英语 初一英语教案 c1Unit 1 My name’s Gina.
广西田阳高中高一英语上学期11月考试卷及答案
高中英语第五册Unit 13单词讲解课件
2011年湖北省随州市中考英语试题及答案
初中英语 初一英语教案 Unit 2 Is this your pencil?
高中英语第五册Unit18Inventions课件
不限 |
英语教案 |
英语课件 |
英语试题 |
不限 |
不限 |
上册 |
下册 |
不限 |