题目:请以Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。
Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest
温泉让我得到休息
We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, Wow, it is hot! I didnt know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me...So I walked carefully into the spring. One step,two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.
我们脱下外套,快速奔向柠檬泉,当我第一次把脚伸进水中时,我大声喊道:哇,水是热的!我一开始不知道水如此热,所以我有点儿担心会被热水烫到。于是,我小心翼翼地走进温泉,一步,两步......我能感觉到热量慢慢地进入我的身体。
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