2016届江西浮梁县高考英语二轮复习短文改错演练（4）

　　江西浮梁县2016高考英语短文改错【二轮】演练（4）

　　短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he should ask for

　　leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject. In the end of that term, we told him that how much we appreciated him. We were so worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what medicine he took. With satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a bottle of tea.

　　【参考答案】4.

　　When we had our class, our psychology teacher would take any liquid

　　some

　　medicine from a tiny bottle. This touched the whole classes. We thought that he

　　class

　　should ask for a leave and stayed at home for a rest, so he came to each class on

　　stay

　　but

　　time. Therefore, all of us studied psychology hard than we did any other subject.

　　harder

　　In the end of that term, we told that how much we appreciated him. We were so

　　At

　　worrying about her health that we asked him what disease he got and what

　　worried

　　his

　　medicine he took. With ∧ satisfied smile, he said, “I’m quite all right and it’s a

　　a

　　bottle of tea.”

　　下面是一段文章，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Su Daoquan,aged 65, was a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing.

　　He got a lot of attention to local people earlier this month during

　　the first public appearance of his specially invention — a water bike.

　　The opening performance of his pedal boatgiven on nearby Fujiang

　　River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers.The pedal boat is

　　2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters wider. It has empty metal containers on

　　both sides. The pedals are used to turn to a pedal wheel. The driver can

　　ride it in the center or there is room for two other adult. He said

　　that invented it brought him a lot of joy and that our creation is not

　　harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.　

　　【参考答案】4.

　　Su Daoquan,aged 65, a retired man in Hechuan of Chongqing.

　　He got a lot of attention

　　local people earlier this month during

　　the first public appearance of his

　　invention — a water bike.

　　The opening performance of his pedal boat

　　given on nearby Fujiang

　　River in front of a crowd of more than 100 onlookers.The pedal boat is

　　2.6 meters long and 1.4 meters

　　. It has empty metal containers on

　　both sides.The pedals are used to turn

　　a pedal wheel. The driver can

　　ride it in the center

　　there is room for two other

　　. He said

　　That

　　it brought him a lot of joy and that

　　creation is not

　　harming the environment and is suitable for tourism.

　　短文改错（共10小题；满分10分；改动第11处不计分）

　　In the past, teachers always kept on to explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and take notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. After class, we enjoy different kind of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read that we are interested in. We can go to the library and surf the Internet for variously kinds of information. In my opinion, exploring study does not help us learn much, but also make us to enjoy study and become masters of study.

　　【参考答案】5.

　　1 kept on to – kept on

　　2 our students – we students

　　3 take notes – took notes

　　4 raising – raised

　　5 kind of activities – kinds of activities

　　6 read that – read what

　　7 and surf – or surf

　　8 variously – various

　　9 not help – not only help

　　10 to enjoy – enjoy

　　短文改错。

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10处错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Do you read reviews after you see a movie? I used to do that, but I usually wished I didn’t. I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. The writers point everything out that is wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about one. They also tell the important things and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. I read reviews afterwards, if necessary. It is very important to me is that I don’t watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. And I don’t ask other people how they like of it. Now, I enjoy myself even more.

　　【参考答案】6.

　　1. after-before

　　2. didn’t – hadn’t

　　3. on – in

　　4. go – going

　　5. mentions– mention

　　6. one – it

　　7.

　　way前加the

　　8. It – What

　　9. that – which

　　10. of去掉

　　【2016模拟题】第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每题1分，满分10分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　(2015·江西省八所重点中学高三联考)

　　It is reported that thirty cellphones taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we hold a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about them.

　　Some think it necessarily. Firstly, with cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk message. Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing, at the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.

　　Personally spoken, even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them more than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.

　　答案：

　　It is reported that thirty cellphones

　　taken away by teachers during the examination and were smashed (销毁) in front of students and parents at a high school. As to this, we

　　a heated discussion. There are two different viewpoints about .

　　Some think it . Firstly,

　　cellphones, students would have focused their attention on studying instead of wasting their precious time reading junk . Secondly, the examination will be fair if no one cheats using cellphones. However, the others think it otherwise. For one thing,

　　the age of information, cellphones have become a necessity. For another, students can use cellphones for study.

　　Personally ， even if some students use cellphones for no good reason, we should educate them

　　than destroy cellphones in such an extreme way.

　　1．taken前加were　cellphones是take的动作承受者，应用被动语态。故taken前加were。

　　2．hold→held　根据语境应用过去时，故hold改为held。

　　3．them→it　此处代词是代替前文的discussion。故them改为it。

　　4．necessarily→necessary　think 后跟形容词作宾补，故necessarily应改为necessary。

　　5．with→without　根据句意，应是“没有手机，学生将能集中注意力上课”。故with改为without。

　　6．message→messages　message是可数名词，前没有限定词，应用复数形式，故message改为messages。

　　7．the others前的the去掉　与前文的some对应，用others，故去掉the。

　　8．at→in　in the age of information“在信息时代”，故应将at改为in。

　　9．spoken→speaking　personally speaking“在我看来”。故spoken改为speaking。

　　10．more→rather　rather than而不是。