浙江临安市2016高考英语（二轮）短文改错练习（3）及答案
短文改错
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I’d love to tell you something about my vacation. I’ve been
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looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time, 77．
Yesterday, with my friends, I paid a visit it. We set off at 78．
7:00 am by bus. It is 8 kilometers far away from our city, and 79．
when we got there, it was 7:20 am. There we have a wonderful 80．
time. We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake. 81．
Then we had a picnic by the lake. On the afternoon, we climbed 82．
the Snake Island, picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures. 83．
Time passed very quick. Before we knew it, it was already 16:00, 84．
but we had to go back. How about your vacation? Please write to 85．
me as soon as possible.
【参考答案】4、
短文改错:（满分10分）
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to
help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking
her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,
another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots
of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.
As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are
becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out
my hand without hesitation next time.
【参考答案】6.
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help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking
when
stopped
her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,
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another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots
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of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.
thanks
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becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made ∧my mind that I will reach out
immoral
去掉to
up
my hand without hesitation next time.
短文改错(共10小題;每小題1分,满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage (孤儿院）.As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children. 1Hiey were delighted to receive the gifts. In the morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving the orphanage，we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and help，but in return，they gave us their smiles and love.
【参考答案】5.
Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage
(孤儿院). As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well ∧ many kinds
volunteers
as
of school supplies and toys for the children. They were delighted to receive the gifts. In the
to
morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we
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cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving
the orphanage, we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could
taken
we
keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and
happy
help, but in return, they gave us their smiles and love.
and
短文改错 (共10小题每小题1分，10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.
【参考答案】6.
In the winter vacation, I paid a visit∧a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner
to
had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I
than
surprised
had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry
clean
water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean
themselves
energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can
makes
sets
enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I
what
the
hope the mountain village will become better and better.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
My mother is a teacher work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my mother’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.
【参考答案】
5.work改成working
too改成so
times改成time
on改成in
why改成how
considered改成considering
decided后面加to
secret改成secretly
entered后面去掉into
promises改成promised