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发布时间：2016-03-01 编辑：查字典英语网小编

　　I am a music fans from Chengdu. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding the New Year Concert.

　　I am planning to see the concert, so I need to know the following three(加一个被three修饰的名词). First of all, I want to confirm the date of the concert. Secondly, where is the concerts place? Thirdly, which bus can I take to get the(去掉) there?

　　I would also like to inquire if you please send me some relevant booklets about the above-mentioned aspects?(这是个陈述句，用句号。这句话用在这里比较生硬，很明显是模板中的内容。)Thank you for your consideration, your prompt attention would be highly appreciated.

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