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发布时间：2016-03-01 编辑：查字典英语网小编

　　long(l大写) time no see, what is missing(什么丢了?). You of the life in Japan?(没有谓语)I am writing to inform you that I wish to know if you could like to recommend me some Japanese interesting scenic spots.

　　I decided to(加动词) a trip to Japan next month, and I have searched the relevant information in web, but the opinions vary, let me also no idea(没有主语，这是中式化的表达，不要这样用).

　　So I want to hear your opinion. First of all, (没有主语)want to eat the authentic Janpanese(拼写错误)food where to go? Secondly, where can bubble to real springs. Finaly(拼写错误), where the crazy better exhibition.(没有谓语)

　　Word fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you .I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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