I saw your advert(advertisement,advert是注意、谈到的意思) for the post of sales representive(拼写错误) in yesterdays newspaper and I would like to apply for the position.
As you can see from my attached CV, I had obtain the bachelor(bachelors)degree on sales management. Moreover, I have been working for a fast consumption goods company for two years when(after) I left my university. Finally, I have strong communication ability and coordinated ability, which are help(这里应该用形容词helpful) for sales work.
Please note that my current manager has agreed to write me a reference. I look forward to hearing from you.
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