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考研英语作文范文批改(34)

发布时间:2016-03-01  编辑:查字典英语网小编

  Im writing this letter to apply for the solar energy project assistant persition(拼写错误) that you have advertised on the webcite(拼写错误).

  I noticed that you need someone that have(它的主语是someone某人,所以这里应该用has) physical background and the eager to study. My majoy(拼写错误) in university is physics,(加连词and) Ive leart(拼写错误) all the essensial(拼写错误) courses in physics. Also I have curiosity to everything that can interests(情态动词can后用动词原形) me, including the reneable(拼写错误) energy.

  I think Im the suitable person for this persiton (拼写错误)with my knowleage(拼写错误) and hard working spirit.

  Ill be appriciate(拼写错误,这里需要一个形容词,appreciated) that if you give me a chance to the interview. thank(t大写)you for you to read this letter and Im waiting for your letter(避免重复,改成reply).have a nice day(这一部分去掉).

  

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