考研英语待批改作文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University.I am writing letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly advertised position for an accountant.
I am sure that I am qualified for it.To begin with,enclose with this letter is my resume,which further detail my academic qualifications and work experience.Then,I am not only familaring with Microsofe Word,Excel,but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills.Last but not least,my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant.
Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me.I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours turly,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am sure that I am qualified for it. To begin with, enclose with this letter is my resume, which further detail(应该用第三人称单数形式) my academic qualifications and work experience. Then, I am not only(应该改为not only I am,与后面的格式保持一致) familaring(拼写错误) with Microsofe(拼写错误) Word, Excel, but also I have ability to work independently and good organizational skills. Last but not least, my prudent personality is well suited to study in your prestigious working as an accountant.
Words fail me and I wish to express my sincere gratitude to the help you render me. I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours turly(拼写错误),
Li Ming(落款部分位于右下角)
点评:7分
写的不错,要注意拼写问题。另外句子、用词最好简练。
I am a senior undergraduate from the department of financial management of Xuzhou Normal University. I am writing (加the或this)letter in purpose of applying for admission into your recetly(拼写错误) advertised position for an accountant.
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